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Fuimiko Akazawa. A sixteen year old girl who became the leader of her father's yakuza group at the young age of twelve due to his assassination by a rival group. She has been plotting a plan for revenge ever since that day. However, while carrying out her vendetta, she finds herself near death from a bullet shot by the same man who killed her father. When she regains consciousness, she finds herself in a world that she doesn't recognize.

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shader009Royal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

There are two major problems which annoy me as of the latest chapter (5).
1) M.C.'s background. Most stories of this genre usually flesh out the past life some more. No I don't want to know her entire life history, but information pertinent to the events leading up to her death should have been more detailed. I mean, we know nothing except her name, the names of a few side characters of unknown importance, and that someone murdered / killed her father for some reason and that she's out for revenge. Not a lot to go on before she's suddenly dead. We don't get to know her before her reincarnation?.
2) After waking up in the hospital, it's the nurse who starts giving us the backstory of the world. Now I've got no problems with the time meteorite concept. While somewhat weird, it's not the most outlandish thing I've read, and I must admit it's a novel concept. Only plothole i can think of is that all biological life was unaffected by it, but that too can be ignored for the benefit of the story. My only gripe here is the way the infodump is handled. It's as if the nurse somehow knows that she is from the past and explains the lore accordingly. The first questions about the state of the world should have come from the M.C. herself . Would have been easily acceptable to the other characters because of her established amnesia. The content and delivery of the lore however is not a problem.
After this however the story begins to improve. Yes one chapter ( the problem areas end at chapter 4) is not enough to make an accurate judgement about the story and I agree, but I also have to say that I like how it's progressing. I don't know if i will continue to like this story, but here to a successful future author sama.

StarchillerRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

The Infodumps in the second? chapter are not great but it gets better afterwards. Looking forward to see more chapters.

WolfieRoyal Road

★★ 2.0

So even if you want to help, it will be plainly disregarded. Don't bother commenting on grammar/plot or any other errors since it will most likely fall on deaf ears. (or the author is running some strange annual checks, but in the end it's as if it was completely disregarded)
Setting:
So we have technology rewound 2000 years back, yet still everybody uses quite modern inventions (like matches that were invented in XIX century [yes, these for starting fire were] and other inventions one can forget how advanced they are). Living conditions are also surprisingly good, considering all advancements made in last 2000 years are magically gone.

farmersteveRoyal Road

★★ 2.0

You need to re-write the first senctence in the first chapter. "Walk in, a man wearing a suit..." Should read something like "A man in a suit walks into the room."
I did read the first chapter. You change perspective from third to first a couple of times. Keep it all in 3rd.

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