The Weight of Time

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Description

Urn Creshun, a young boy who could never settle for an ordinary existence, yearned for a life painted in vibrant hues, regardless of the mundane circumstances that bound him. He felt like he was drifting through a monochrome dream, merely existing. But all that changed on the day he inherited the Orian Locket, a legendary artifact of immeasurable power. When he dawned it around his neck, he was catapulted into a world of enchantment, inhabited by magic, monstrous beings, regal monarchs, and long-buried mysteries.

As Urn grapples to harness newfound abilities and forge meaningful bonds, he unwittingly unearths a chilling revelation about the true nature of the locket. What's more, a shadowy group of individuals stop at nothing to seize this omnipotent relic.

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Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
gomamon

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICDRAMAMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSREINCARNATIONHIGH FANTASYVILLAINOUS LEADTIME TRAVEL

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
11
Views
7,003

Chapters(32 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • laltopiaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Hello everyone. I’ll go one category  at a time! But for those eager to know what I think, here it is. Interesting story in a style I had never seen before and am enjoying very much.
    overall I considered the first fell chapters with a lot of potential. For me the first chapters are responsible for giving you a feel for what it is to come and so far I believe it did it. I believe there are always ways to improve, and the score might go up to 5 in the next few chapters.
    in style I gave it five because it is the first trial storie based I have read, making it a first and interesting for me.
    so far I met with 4 characters and 2 others were mentioned. It is clear that a mastery about the main character grandfather is there for us to unveil as the storie goes on, but I love the idea of a kid fish being their guardian and protector. My favorite character is absolutely the fish. But I enjoyed very much the interaction with the rat and the back and forward of their game style trial.
    story so far has been easy to follow, with many mysteries that I hope the next chapters start to explain. But I liked the trial based plot. It gives us a something to anticipate on the next chapter.
    on grammar, I’m not a native English speaker, so I don’t believe I can add much on that regard.