The Weaver's Wrath
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Millennia have passed since the end of the God Wars. Mankind's heroes of these wars, the powerful Luminescents, have since become the rulers of the lands, relying on their ancestors' deeds to fuel their own ambitions. The Church itself has fractured since the death of their Goddess. Now it has shifted its focus to a new power - the descendents of the men and women who had received her blessing in the past - the Luminescents. However, with the death of the Goddess Selene, their own abilities began to lessen in quality with each successive generation, leaving them grasping desperately at whatever they can; money, lands, power. Sevrath was born in a time far different than that of ages past. Much of the continent was under the rule of the powerful Luminescent rulers. The Gods were dead and gone; the age of man had begun. Only the Desolate Lands lay unconquered and resolute, a relic of the power of Deimos, the God of Death and Destruction. So when he is found near the borders of the Desolate Lands, what does it mean? Is he some spawn of demon, like many of the townsfolk of Carthal believe, or something else altogether? ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- This will not necessarily be something that is updated often. Book 1: The Weaver's Wrath Book 2: The Berserker's Burden Book 3: The Artificer's Absolution Book 4: The Guardian's Grace
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Xyphias
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- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 45
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- 17,187
Chapters(11 total)
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Community Reviews(4)
- BockusRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I'm not that terribly good of a reviewer, but this is one of the best thing's I've read on this site. Only 4 chapters in and I already can't wait for more. If you are here randomly, do yourself the pleasure of reading this series.
With that all said, there is really only one misgiving I've encountered so far. This is a really wordy story. By this I mean this author knows the English language extremely well, and they use that knowledge extensively. With this it makes it a bit harder to follow for others. It actually enhances the story and I think its extremely refreshing to encounter a story written like this. Just wanted to mention it. - F.DjRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Man, your vocabulary and grammar were superb! I found many things to learned just from reading your story. And the story itself were also great, I can’t believe this people hardly notice this. In overall quality your story are far much better then some of the top weekly-monthly charts, they’re dumb fools for missing this awesome story. And honestly some of those charts seater were like a trash when compared with your work. But there is one shortfall in here, you definitely are need pump up the release frequency, it’s lacking and it kills us your fan readers. Nevertheless, you still deserves my divine cookies and I’ll give you five at that. Bravo!!!
PS: are you a professional writer, I seriously felt like you do ? - TDM_MystRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0The story is only in its earliest stages but the way this is heading now seems promising.
Style is top-notch. One could mistake this with a proffesional novel, I can only appeal to all those that see this review: Read this fiction!
Of course there is a slight drawback, people that want to read a simple story with easy to understand words, such as those I am using right now, and a simple sentence structure -or those that are generally not well-versed in english- will find it hard to read this story. I can say of myself that my english vocabulary is in no way inferior to your average english speaker yet I catched myself at using translator sites to understand some words.
Grammar? Perfect. This is how 5 stars should be earned.
Character? I left it blank since there are barely any characters at this point of the fiction and the MC in itself had only sparse chances to show his personality.
This is an absolute diamond as it is right now. You should only seperate your paragraphs into smaller segments. I would make myself a rule of thumb that when the text covers half of your monitor it has to be apportioned accordingly to the segments meanings.
Please, keep it up. I do not want to see an author such as yourself succumb because no one seems to give you feedback. If you expect critiscism, sorry you are just that good man…! :D - WhassupRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Ok, now that I have your attention... This is like the first book of GoT, where everything happens locally.
Hopefully author doesn't take the GRRM route and start nipping everyone off. Or wait, red weddings would fit marvelously into this...