The way you live like you do
Self-Published
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Description
Ben is a terminally online, physically and mentally disabled person via his behavior. All the suffering he has caused is by his own doing, all he can do is continue with his bad habits. An idea of my personal Hell and bleak future.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- ogredale
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 151
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- RznRoyal Road★★ 2.0This could use some line breaks, copyediting to clean it up into a more readable format. This was all about describing a physically and mentally disabled person who is 'terminally online'. It doesn't do so with any narrative arc, just a list of all what ails them. That sort of thing, particularly with physical disabilities is something that sort of mocks them is not good. The mental aspect is not really covered here, but it sounds like someone has a severe disability with muscle pain and nerve hypersensitivity and that all this pain is their own doing. Even for a caricature, that's a bit far.