The Way too OP Traveler.
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Description
Hello my name is Ito Aki. I am just a normal ordinary person, at least I think so, Except for one thing I can hear the voice of god's. I don’t really know why either. But that's pretty much it. Other than that I’m normal. So why did I get picked by the God of all Evil to be his retainer and was thrown into a different world? Follow me the MC where I travel this new world and make myself enemies and many new friends.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- HarbingerofChaos
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- Rating
- 2.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 282
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Community Reviews(3)
- HexwolfxRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I really like the MC and hope for him to have some mature action with the girls. Also are the people he placed in his inventory still connected to him?
- RassilonRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Writer please, change the title to the Way "TOO" OP traveller, that's just bad grammar and the the improper use of to.
Will read through once it has changed and writer a normal review - AltmaRoyal Road★★ 2.0(I stopped at Chapter 9)
I enjoyed the premise - OP Characters are why I read here, after all. Even the story's development doesn't seem too bad, albeit a bit fast. However, once I hit chapter 8, my brain suddenly couldn't grasp what was happening.
The dialogue is the bad part here, and I instantly struggled to stay in to the story. Simply put, that's not how people talk. The conversations become very inorganic and this feels like what should have been the rough draft that you accidentally published.
If English isn't your first language, I highly suggest taking this through a (harsh) editor or posting the dialogue lines to an English speaking friend.
I hope you keep posting and continue to improve, because I enjoyed the flow of the story. The stilted writing is what pulled me out.