The warriors end
Self-Published
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Description
This is a short story that follows a warriors last moments after a battle
don’t expect much this is my first attempt at writing
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- warjosh56
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- Rating
- 1.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 338
Chapters(1 total)
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- RznRoyal Road★★ 1.5The author says this is there first work. Some of the major issues in this piece can be fixed by having good structure with line breaks, proper punctuation and deciding what is important and what is not to the piece. The italicized litrpg-like elements are devoid of context and really do not add much to the piece because there is no basis for appreciating it. From where we start as a reader, it is already the end - so the piece is already limited by the finality.