The Wanted Wife: Daddy, Mommy Escapes Again!
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The whole life of Li Jingzhi could be concluded with one sentence: His ups and downs in life is all due to Si Luoming. When he was young, he dreamed to be a person like him…Till the end she finds that he hated her, especially when she "murdered" the one in his heart indirectly. Since then, he has never hidden his hatred for her. And then she knows her life has already been messed up all these years…
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Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Mason
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 8
- Views
- 37,795
Chapters(71 total)
- C31. Going to Su Family for AccountabilityMar 17, 2020
- C30. Subtle ChangesMar 14, 2020
- C29. What She Was Like in Her DreamsMar 12, 2020
- C28. Inexplicable Feelings of IrritabilityMar 11, 2020
- C27. A So-called RascalDec 14, 2019
- C26. You are the devilDec 6, 2019
- C25. The Most Annoying Thing Is BetrayalDec 2, 2019
- C24. The Trustee Doesn’t DeserveNov 24, 2019
- C23. A Man’s AppearanceNov 23, 2019
- C22. Only Struggling to EscapeNov 21, 2019
- C21. Taking Nelson Back OvernightNov 20, 2019
- C20. The Child Is All to HerNov 17, 2019
- C19. You Go,but Leaving Nelson behindNov 16, 2019
- C18. Come to Su’s HouseNov 15, 2019
- C17. He Is Intentional!Nov 14, 2019
- C16. See Tabitha AgainNov 13, 2019
- C15. If They Want to Echo Each Other, Just Let Them Do ItNov 12, 2019
- C14. Florence Li,Come Over.Nov 12, 2019
- C13. The Purpose of Austin’s ReturnNov 10, 2019
- C12. Please Ask Miss Li to Go with UsNov 9, 2019
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Community Reviews(1)
- Leecher5515Royal Road★★★★ 4.0You have your own unique style with this story, with a series of problems happening immediately after each other, but overall the story feels slightly rushed. It feels like the way it's currently written could use some flashbacks to extend the introduction of side characters and give us a better sense of who these people are, given all the emotional baghage inherent in your story. You definitely need to have a proofreader go over it, and some of your sentences are awkward. It is readable though, which is a major point in your flavor. Some stories on royalroadl read like a bad google translation.
Your story is interesting, and each chapter makes you curious about the next one, but currently it reads like a web serial, and your characters are slightly shallow, but we're still early in the story and you have time to improve on that. Your antagonist could use some scenes without the main character where you expand on who he is as a person beyond I'm the evil villain who will get my way because I'm rich. Who was the person she was originally in love with? Or you need to show how she was a shallow person who would love a jerk like that in the past.