The Wanderer(Hiatus)

Self-Published

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Description

A pitch-black child-like figure quietly floats around in the cold space without a sense of direction or time. A tale of a mighty yet miserable entity searching for its long-lost emotions, memories and family all the while searching to find a meaning for its seemingly meaningless existence.ps- This book will be in hiatus for long amount of time until I have written enough chapters to publish comfortably with a good schedule. The book will be rewritten

**I know the cover is from limbo but this is almost exactly like how my character looks, so please bear with this for a while until I make an original cover**

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021
Author
Crakednut69

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADSTRONG LEADPSYCHOLOGICALMALE LEADGRIMDARKHIGH FANTASYSPACE OPERATIME TRAVEL

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Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
1
Views
1,871

Chapters(5 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • The Book KeeperRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The story is fairly new and not many chapters are out. So my review would be quite topical.
    Even though I don't really care much about the science fiction-esque stories, this one really pulls you in with the characterisation of the creature. I like how the interactions are described in detail and the writer takes time to explain what the creature is feeling. As the story is still being set up, I can't say much about the plot, but the writer do have a way of making me care about the character.
    Some criticims though-
    -I have noticed a few minor grammatical mistakes and it leads me to believe that the writer is not using a software such as Grammarly or Google Docs. They can help you avoid the minor grammatical mistakes here and there.
    -Some sentences have too many commas in them, which makes it a bit difficult to follow what the writer wants to put emphasis on. The meaning gets lost in the jumble of commas. I would advice you to use shorter sentences. After all, it is much more important for reader to understand the emotion and flow of the passage.
    In all, a solid premise and beginning.