The Void Swarm a Swarm/Hive-Mind Litrpg

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The story of Kim Smith a young American-Korean who is born with paralysis unfolds when his father integrates an advanced AI chip infused with a newly discovered gem. His life takes an extraordinary turn when he encounters a creature from the void that pulls him into the void. Facing a huge creature devouring a planet, Kim catches its attention. Intrigued by Kim's unique fusion with the AI chip, the Void Mother transforms him into a Hive Mind with free will and throws him in a lower plane.

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Community Reviews(2)

  • RufusTheDufusRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Hello, I would like to say that your story has a lot of potential but I think it needs a little more meat on the bone. I will let the first chapter slide because it's just a setup but I think other people might just abandon the story if they see such a short chapter.
    Also, please don't quit in the middle of writing this book or take a hiatus. I really want this book to sucseed because I like hive - queen stories and there are too many incomplete ones.
    I hope your story flourishes and I don't mind you using AI have a good day.
  • maplezeroRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    it is good nothing else to say but i have also tried to write a hivemind story but this is way better than mine so keep up the good work i am going to try again and i might take some inspiration(steal) some parts of your story so when i post it do come by :)