The virtual mind

Progress some say it exists with technology some say it exists with biology

I say that its when both happen at the same time

A story about at a man that gets thrown into a new world with the help of some mysterious technology and a world connected by a virtual one

Theres a lot of things that are unfished about this story  (all of it) but feedback is  good I guess, so far its just me uploading my free writing from my class

Also my grammar and such isn't the best I could use some help ;3