The Villain Wants to Quit

Self-Published

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Description

Through a set of rather unfortunate circumstances, Theo accidentally became one of the most notorious villains in the continent. He would really like to quit.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021
Author
Otiose Ninja

Tags

FANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADMALE LEADHIGH FANTASYPROGRESSION

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Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
7
Views
1,432

Chapters(4 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • The OxRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    This a decently written fantasy adventure story that needs a different title. I'm taking points off because the title really misrepresents who Theo is and his possible journey had the story kept moving forward.
    IMO a much more accurate title would be something like " The Minion Wants to Quit" because it much better explains Theo's conundrum.  From the first scene we see Theo regretting his life choices as he is faced with a cell block full of malnourished children in the secret tunnel system he was sent to rob treasure from.  Sent by his BOSS the VILLAIN, Theo is a minion.  You can only describe him as a  lowercase v villain, if you want to get described on the title as a upper case V Villain you don't work for other people dude.  At best you need to be an independent contractor like an assassin for hire or something.