The Veiled Ones
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Description
Life is hell in the realm of Ikorum. Political instability, a vile King, and a land on the brink of war are the least of everyone's worries. The flesh feasting monsters that emerge in the night threaten to dismantle human civilization as you know it.
The Veiled Ones follows the story of Iris Valdya and her journey to becoming a Warden; knights dedicated to the destruction of all evil monsters. Along the way she finds the most unexpected friends.
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(Hello all! I chose to limit the book and its contents to only a single storyline for the 1st book. The actual release of the book is being worked on with publishers. I hope to get the entire thing released soon! Thanks all :)
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- AnthonyNunezTVO
Tags
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- Rating
- 3.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 54
- Views
- 2,511
Chapters(8 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- PlatypushoverRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I find this book suprisingly good, even though I rarely read stories with femele leads.
Style is fitting perfecly with the setting, and gives the reader evertyhing they need to understeand the story. 5/5
Story is also very good, after reading a good part of the currently aviable chapters, I didn't spot major weaknesses of the plot. There is a minor one though, Its a little too unrealistic in some scenes, but I believe those will be adressed later in the story. 4,5/5
Grammar is simply amazing, the lines fit together and form coherent sentences. Soem words may be too advanced for me, or too medieval like for me to understeand, but the context makes up for my lacking knowledge. 5/5
Characters are good, defined and recognisable from each other, but nothing amazing. It may be because i read early chapters, but i found myself unable to place myself in the mc's spot, to agree with her choices. 3.5/5
Overall, the story is good, it shows an amazing, but scary world in which zombie like monsters run rampant. Despite the danger, the society seems bonded together, sharing the pain of their peers to an extend. It feels alive, and i could believe the interactons between People, and sometimes their intention.
Overall 4/5