The Vampire Empress

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To think that I, someone who once was the proud heiress of the vampire clan, would be transported to another world to help humans prosper, what kind of ridiculous request is this...?! WHAT?! You are making me manage a cursed town?! AGAIN, WHAT?! The young king is spreading love-stricken rumors about me and worse, the demon queen is interested me?! GIVE ME A BREAK, I JUST WANTED MY COFFEE AND SLEEP!

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Mihou Shindou

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.6/ 5.0
Followers: 70
Views: 22,069

Chapters(31 total)

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KlarelRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I like the premise, but the exicution leaves a lot to be desired. First off they go with making pretty much everyone brain-dead-brick level of dumb.
They apparently have never thought of seasoned toast (garlic bread) and are willing to pay the equivalent of millions of dollars to the the recipie ffs
It reminds me of another story(acendence of a bookworm) where apparently they NEVER even thought to use broth, so they went through the extra step of draining the liquid after boiling food just to add water after everything was cooked to make a soup... They were apparently doing extra work for hundreds/thousands of years before the MC came alone and was like 'why u no do this thing?'
It Really annoys me when stories have stuff like this in them. It doesn't make the MC look smart, it just makes everyone else look really dumb.
I like the main character, but a lot of the others just annoy me, and there are quite a few plot holes you could fit an elephant through.
They summoned a hero to manage a cursed town? Tf?
The grammar and word use could use some work too. It's not too bad usually, but there are places where I have no idea what the author is trying to say.