The unyielding lost girl
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A girl suddenly wakes up in the middle of nowhere, with no recollection of her past, of her own identity, and no purpose.
Her body seems to have been unconscious for quite a while.Moving is more troublesome than expected.
Everything that she possesses is her wit, her sensations, and her intuition.
Follow the adventures of ???, discover her name, and unravel the truths and rules of the world around her.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Askael
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 14
- Views
- 2,780
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- deus vultRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0the story reads like a first draft. and it probably is. there's not much to think about it's writing quality, the author should and started using more spaces and semicolons. which made the quality slightly better. hopefully it'll continue to improve from there. asides from it being short and condensed I think it's not bad in terms of grammer. there are no obvious mistakes, and it is not "badly" written. but it does lack direction and exposition as well as length.
there's not much else to say about the story, the chapters are short, the mc is violent, and everyone seems to want to kidnap and rape her - which probably only helps her relieve some stress. if I were the mc I would start drawing these people out just so I'd have something to do lol.
anyways, I'm leaving a five star review so hopefully in the future more people will see this novel since I kinda like it.