The Undead Revolution

Information

Status

Hiatus

Author

ylosp

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• sarbificationRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Realy, i dont know what to say about fiction, when you read something good you even can't add something to story for beter plot, and this fiction is exactly like that. It have so good well passing plot, and have some depth, charater is good and have purpose to kill some bad people (and some). Realy it like a book written by a man who know what he want to write.
  P.S. About grammatical can't say anyting due to the fact that I am not a native speaker.
• KapRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Ok so first. English is not the Author's native language and that said if they hadn't stated so I would have never known. Kudos for that.
  As for story itself. The MC is written well and her abilities are powerful but not immediately a God broken. She still has to learn and grow.
  Now the world building. YES. This should be used as an example for building a story and letting it unfold for the reader. MC is an orphan 12 year old.  She knows enough about her own world that we don't need exposition dumps on how money works but is still ignorant of the wider world enough that readers still get to learn as she does.
  Cannot WAIT for more.
• OmelRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Very strong hook that leads into an above average story. I definetly recommend this one to any LitRPG fans.
  Strengths:
  The characters feel very real. Each and everyone we meet has their own life. Even when we only know one for a chapter or a couple paragraphs, the characters we meet have goals and ambitions that do not neccessarily revolve around the MC or are convenietly placed for the MCs benefit if that makes sense.
  Grammar is a non issue and scenes do not lack detail, nor are they overdetailed.
  Mc has original abilities that are both wonderfully op, but also realistic with their own realistic weaknesses.
  Faults:
  The only aspects that make this story anything less than stellar are the Magic system and the sterotypical Rpg world.
  The magic is not very magical and doesn't leave me intersted in learning anymore about it, which is darn shame because I love magic.
  The world isn't anything we haven't seen before. Dungeons, adventures, mages guild, yadda yaddaa. Monsters are very bland as well, which is another love of mine.
  Yet despite these minor faults, I still enjoy this story and believe it is going to attract quite a few followers.
• Ronny766Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I feel extremely sad that the author has put it on hiatus indefinitely but I do understand why he's doing it.
  Now onto the review
  The story might be paced a bit slow but it's quite intriguing. What interested me the most was the possibilities of what the main character could become in the future. Her powers and possible hidden abilities. On the other hand, the plot does feel a bit lacking in some sort of spice or spark. However, the action, possibilities, and characters somewhat makes up for it. The characters in the story are unique each with their own goals and personalities. Grammar is great, nothing to complain about there. Overall, this is great.
• daspabloRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Why does this not have any reviews yet?
  Anywho, here be my opinions.
  here we have a strong MC that needs to work for things
  Her cheats are logically used and constent.
  Her character itself is believable.
  Tldr. This is a well done work that needs more reader attention.
• Darkness that feast upon weakRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I enjoyed reading the story, I wanted to see what happened next and beacuse of it I'm sad to see you go. You should just eat them all.
  The Undead Revoultion is reason I will look for more undead/zombie/necromancy stories in the future.
  The charachters were funny, MC acted her age. There were bits of everything, even walls of text, but I didn't mind those much.
  The world building suffered a bit in the first arc, but that could have easily changed.
  I like the story. I like Silvy as MC. I hope you don't give up writing because of this.
  I loved you story and I thank you for it.
• OxenThunderRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I like it alot. It's a well done zombie/litrpg story with some fun additions. Some advice would be to work on the flow of your action scenes.
• darkalter2000Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  It was dropped right when it was getting good.
• MrHrulginRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  A solid story. It's definitely gory, but it always feels in service to the plot rather than entirely gratuitous. The protagonist is consistent, maybe mature for a child but also given her background it's not unreasonable. The day to day plot is interesting, and there's enough hints scattered through of the larger meaning and reactions of the world to keep me wanting more. This isn't a world where there's a single OP MC and everyone just cowers, the antagonists are people with their own plans and plots.
  The only downside is very occasional grammar errors, but it's mostly good.
  Definitely worth a look and a read.
• XeroDKRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  The plot is good but it drags on frequently with infodumps which have important information about the setting (The author doesn't have the time or talent to fill us in any other way). Some small details pleasantly come back but their not written like it matters until the stuff happens. The story is progressing nicely but sometimes unrealistically. For every nice thing I have to say, there is always a negative. For every leap forward, there is a leap back. This is a book where you need to continually compromise to get something good only to be a bit more disappointed every time. In the end, is it worth it?
  I hope the plot goes somewhere because 27 chapters in, it seems like a mish mash of things happening to the protagonist, Silvy. The most troubling thing about this story is that the main character doesn't have much agency. Things just happens and then she, a 12-year-old girl, acts unrealistically as if she's an adult that knows what she's doing. This only comes off as pretentious because her actions are only a result of her circumstances. The only reason why she is acting is because she's reacting. How are we supposed to relate to her?
  The little agency Silvy has is her desire for revenge and survival mind set which are bottom of the barrel motivations but okay. But then the little choice she does have is snatched away when the undead core starts talking and goes on a ramage.
  Spoiler: Spoiler
  In recent chapters, she does gain full control of her powers which is okay. Now she can get some real choices.
  I absolutely hate it when something the protagonist has starts talking and steals agency from the character.
  Teenage pretentiousness is a hallmark of angsty behavior and it painfully shows here in Slivy. Let me explain in this spolier.
  Spoiler: Spoiler
  She opens herself up to Lindrl, a mature move that gave her an ally in a powerful position. However, after everything Lindrl has done for her, Silvy was still suspicious and mistrustful of her. Of course, the author tel