The Two-faced Otaku

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

On the front line of the war, there’s a little boy. White hair, red eyes and porcelain white skin, he commands an army of different races. He is called Kei Von Deaux. In the past he was called Haru, he is from Earth one of the so called perfect ikimen. Always good in class, sports and is also good in using musical instruments but was reborn as a little boy after he was killed by truck-san with 72 killing streaks and end up meeting a mysterious old man who calls himself “God.” And this little boy, who is actually otaku on the inside decided to dominate the world. He wanted to try conquering this new world using his newly acquired power - OTAKU SYSTEM

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
324
Views
142,703

Chapters(24 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

  • AkenoRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    ! I never thought I would find a gem in rough on this site. I love the MC's personality especially his looks, OH MY GOD! as a woman, we definitely need to read a fiction where the MC is really handsome. I always loved watching anime and I like the way you portrayed their skills.
    Dear Author,
    Don't even think of dropping it or I will find and force you to continue writing this fiction and I'm telling you now, forcing someone to do something for me is my specialty and I can assure you that you won't like my method so keep writing if you don't want that to happen okay?
    Yours truly,
    Your Yandere fan
  • BelgrieveRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I gave 5 stars, even if it's 4 star at best, to balance the bad review above. The guy above clearly didn't read with attention or is only here to mess around, probably both.
    The first point he made regarding the chapter being short and the story beig linear could be attributed at the fact that english may not be the author first language and tbh this style is similar to what most japanese author do.
    The development of the characters first of all isn't easy to do, many top FF on RRL had this problem, and they still did good. The second thing is that you can't except in five chapters to have a serious development, otherwise the story would have the problem of being too rushed.
    The most idiotic coment the guy above made was: "This isn't even the worst thing yet. He fucking speaks an entire sentence at his own baptism, and I can only guess he was also walking around as well. He is f*cking 1." from this, you can clearly understand that he didn't read shit, because it was clearly stated that the reason he developed this fast was because their race grow 4 times faster than humans.
    The last thing I would like to address what is the reason that push you to write this kind of comment, boredom? Fun? Envy? Why would you do such a thing, this community is for people that want to share their work and people that want to read them, don't be a dick there are way to seek attention, being a bitch is not one of them.
    Bye, I'm out.
  • DemonicRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    First of all, i rated how I see it how I felt should be the case the chapters are not the biggest but it follows a traditional Japanese arc like style its grammar is decent, not perfect the character at the moment is a tad cliched but has a semi formed personality we are 10 to 15 chapters in you would be rushing development of the story by thinking that it should be different and most of the time an author writes about the scenario for the chapter and not continue on they leave it for the next scenario and the next chapter also if you don't like it don't hate on it give constructive criticism and help the story move on.
  • MegaMan1996Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I am in love with this I just found it today and just finished it now, and I gotta say I want more! The story is a little lazy, but I'm just saying that because I see it so much but that what I'm looking for.
  • ZenoDarkabladeRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Same here the story should be a lil longer but so far so good u gotta new reader
  • GuideGooseRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    So after my 0.5/5 review, I got support on it and also hate from the diehard fans too blinded by how much they like the type of story that they couldn't see how low it actually is. I kept checking the story to see if anything would improve, and fortunately it did.
    The chapter length (first 5) wasn't really improved too much but an improvement is still an improvement. There is more detail to read - albeit still lacking - and some points I brought up before were explained. Mainly, the MC used to randomly be able to walk and talk at the age of 1 without explanation. He did so at his own baptism.
    This time around, however, the author added a 4x growth multiplier to the MC's race. (Edit: Seems like this was already in the story but I must have skipped past it due to how garbage the story used to be.)
    The speech is still clunky and not fleshed out too well, but it is more presentable. I still hate how God is presented though.
    Another big change was the first love interest chapter being revised. That girl that is seen lolling over the MC in the 4th chapter used to be a snotty kid that pretty much said she hated all princes because all nobles were assholes, and guys were evil, and yada yada yada but half way through her speech she saw the MC and lost her shit.
    Just the revising of those first 5 chapters really saved the story imo. I was able to get through it without cringing the entire way through. Though the story isn't for me, it will certainly be for others. The improvements are no joke and the author should continue to improve the story.
    Stats have been bumped up and have gone from an overall of 0.5/5 to 2.5/5. The story as a whole is still cringey and has a lot to improve upon, but at least it is doing so one step at a time.