The Twisted Grove
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
This short story follows three teammates accidently entering a new world hidden in the Earth. As they explore the rules of this world challenges emerge at every corner. Their choices will define their path as they see the most desperate sides of humanity, for better or worse.
This story is a dark sci-fi adventure that I plan to add more chapters to. Each chapter will bounce between one of our three protagonists.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- Mellow0
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 544
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- ShadowAetherRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I like the fast-paced action that jumps right into the story and sets a dark, intriguing tone. The aliens are creative and well-designed. However, I’m not a fan of the frequent two-sentence paragraph structure, which feels choppy at times. Additionally, there are some noticeable grammar errors that could benefit from polishing to improve readability.