The Triplet's Dungeons - Book 1 – Dungeon Foundations

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A set of tween Triplets get kidnapped and converted into three Dungeon Cores. Will the three survive and thrive, learning how to control their new powers? Will the world survive releasing three precocious tweens into it as Dungeons, the most powerful monster known?

Follow along with Jessica, Monty and Sara, as they learn and grow as brand new Dungeons. Face their challenges, threats, triumphs and defeats with them, as they learn to craft that mostenigmatic of things, a living, breathing Dungeon.

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2024

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Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
102
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25,868

Chapters(26 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • A. StargazerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Reviewed at chapter 7, which is presently all that's available.
    I had fun reading this story.  Five stars overall.
    As far as the story goes, without giving away more than is in the blurb, the conflict starts right away, and the pace itself is fairly quick.  The last chapter I read was a bit of a cliffhanger, but everything so far has been quite well done.
    In terms of style, the author put the story together quite well in terms of technique, flow, and other such technical jargon.  The least quantifiable aspect of style, voice, didn't seem particularly unique to me so far.  However, I've only seen the author narrating one of the three MCs at this point, and it could be the character's voice that I'm hearing instead of the author's.
    Grammatically I saw no errors that impacted my enjoyment of the story.
    The characters were interesting and mostly well done.  My only deduction from five stars is due to my disbelieve at how one of the side characters reacts to the situation.
    Jessica's mother accepts the situation with a bit too much equanimity for me to find credible.  While Jessica's own acceptance of her new life as a dungeon can be explained by her change in biology, I'd expect her mother to show some more signs of grief; denial, anger, bargaining, etc.
    in summary, I think that if you enjoy dungeon core stories you'll definitely enjoy this one!
  • GoblinHordeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Amusing dungeon core story!  Needs more goblins, but great as is!   Looking forwards to seeing more Aunt Death, and to how the cores grow and work together. Some minor typos and formatting issues, but a great start, and well worth following.  Interesting world, and particularly the non-isekai isekai.  Liked the 'phone home' bits.
  • NaClisSaltyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Love the story, excellent writing and grammar quality. The narrative is interesting. The first chapter felt a little immature but the character is 13. Something I would be interested in is to see the perspectives of the other kids/dungeons more interspersed with what so far seems to be the main character Jessica but I’m not sure if there are plans or a specific reason why they haven’t been shown yet. Pacing and narrative wise it feels a bit weird we haven’t had any perspective from the other two yet (not even an interlude of sorts) but I presume there’s a narrative reason why. Otherwise I love the story so far and keep up the good work!