The trickle down

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Description

A United states divided. The 1% live in utter luxury right next to the slums, The first of which came 20 years ago, and are now being expanded across the country. The slums, where crime is ridden and police are few. Is where Nick lives. A member of one of the lead gangs who takes it upon himself to free himself from the slums, and save his neighborhood from endless poverty. Only one thing can cause the trickle down, if someone tips the glass over.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022
Author
LAOTZU

Tags

ACTIONADVENTUREANTI-HERO LEADDRAMASHORT STORYDYSTOPIAARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE

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Rating
2.0/ 5.0
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1
Views
147

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  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    This short story is one that is unfortunately hampered by so many basic writing issues that it becomes actually difficult to understand. The dialogue, the prose, the premise and action are all hampered by it. Strangely, while punctuation and other issues come up, there are few typos in this. The MC takes a job to kill someone, but the result is narratively a mess. The story concludes only half-finished it seems; though it is an ending at least.