The Transformation God

Self-Published

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Description

The MC has been ran over crossing over into another world but before he crossed over he receives a message saying

“You have gained Primordial souls with Devouring Trait.”

And now he has to survive in a cultivation world and a overprotective grandpa?

I got the story idea from reading devouring stories while the transformation i got it from a comment made by Kuruto_desu

I also don't own the cover and if you have better one send me PM and i change it

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Chaos Leader

Tags

ACTIONADVENTUREMARTIAL ARTSMULTIPLE LOVERSMALE LEADREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
408
Views
215,293

Chapters(56 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

  • WillyHRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Story not flowing well, i feel like watching a movie which jumping from scene to scene. Ex when MC berserk then suddenly everyone dead, and next he wake up from unconcius for 3 months? There are little error in grammar but acceptable though
  • tyes77Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    the grammar and spelling errors has it play off like a machine translated work. I'm sure with an editor you can make the story more clear despite that i still like it.
  • UlvrRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Your page count is too small. You need to extend your chapters. I understand that you probably want to have a chapter out for people too read, but you want to hold peoples attention for longer than a minute. It probably seems harsh but the moment I feel like I'm getting into it your chapters finished. I know that writing is difficult and writing a good story is so much harder. You have a good story here I dont mind waiting a few more days for a chapter that is long.
  • fleeting cloudsRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The prologue shares so many similarities with "Eat and Grow Strong" it's quite frightening.
  • TenshuraXRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    The story itself isnt at all bad. But the gramar, spelling, and punctuation errors make it nigh unreadable. If you could find someone to help with those I feel like your story will get far better for it.
  • ZackittyRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    I don't want to insult you, but the story just go too fast. It look like you made it all without organisation, and the characters are too           "Easy going".
    I just read 4 chapter and I just can't continue.