The Traitor Druid

Self-Published

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Description

This story is about a soldier from an oppressive regime turned Druid. He was a man who tried to do the right thing in his life. A little too late. He died. Now, reborn he must decide what to do with his new life in this new world. Follow his life journey and how his choices affect the people around him and what led to him betraying his allies. He isn't alone on this life's journey as he will have help from an unusual ally.This is an Isekai/reincarnation story.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Laughing Homer

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 31
Views: 11,046

Chapters(16 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

huemorusRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
You don't really see a lot of good druid based stories out there on this site, but this is def has the potential to be on of the good ones, although there are some glaring issues that can be easily fixed. it isn't super long right now, but that isn't really a problem.
Style: The style falls a bit behind here, mainly due to the grammer issues, but i do like how the worldbuilding isn't super expanded just yet with stuff like "ah, yes im three years old but already learning about geography and politics".
Story: The pacing feels a bit weird but it's more of a personal preference than anything. The main plot so far being about this reincarnated dude that has a druidic talent and is learing the ropes, so we dont have a whole lot of story yet, but i see a lot of potential here.
Grammer: I will say that I bitch about grammer all the time, and I noticed a lot of issues with the formmating looking all clumped together, incorrect punctuation here and there, and really weird looking speech but most of that can be fixed with proof-reading or getting an editor to help.
Character: Some of the character interactions feel a little...weird to me? that may be because of the grammer issues distracting me but i did see a couple interactions that didn't make a whole lot of sense to me. We are only really shown the direct family, the mentor, pet lizard guy, and potential friend that used to hate the mc so we get a pretty decent starting roster that will more than likely stick around for a while.
Overall it's a fun read if you can look past the grammer issues. i hope that they will be fixed in the future. :)