Zheng He? Noooo, run before he finds you!

Experience as Zheng He rises to become the most feared person in the Universe.

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NobodySpecialRoyal Road

★ 1.0

the first main problem with this book is the endless wall of text that forms the chapters, this could be easily fixed just by seperating out the wall with some spaces
the second problem is the almost complete lack of decription, the chapters are almost completely speech, it's just people saying things, there are much better ways to write a book series, just look at almost any other book on this site
the third problem is the nonsense plot of the story, just finished the third chapter and so far seems to aparently been rebirthed into china for some reason where he meets somebody who decided to let this obviously suspicious person into his home to teach his son english despite the fact the suspicious person only knows english and wouldn't even be able to talk with the son who needs to learn english, for some reason suspicious person gets paid (with food and lodging?), also the homeowner is practically budha and has no libido while his very young wife has an exagerated libido, and all of this has absolutely no significance to the plot since he is going to be teleported to another world in a few days
the only reasonable way to fix the third problem is to completely rewrite the book, instead of rebirthing into china maybe he could just rebirth into another world, rebirthing into another world will also give you a convenient excuse to why he can even breath in this new world with his no cultivation

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