The Time Mage

Information

Status

Cancelled

Year

2018

Author

ABPhoenix

• A Tense Escape
  Dec 23, 2018
• Earth Drake
  Dec 17, 2018
• Into the Forest
  Dec 17, 2018
• The invisible man
  Dec 17, 2018
• The trip with the Botanists
  Dec 17, 2018
• The Botanists' Invitation
  Dec 11, 2018
• The Stars at Midnight
  Dec 6, 2018
• A Tour of the Grounds
  Dec 2, 2018
• The Effects of Ether
  Nov 28, 2018
• Saturation and Tolerance
  Nov 25, 2018
• The First Lesson
  Nov 25, 2018
• Term Begins
  Nov 23, 2018
• Botanists and Books
  Nov 21, 2018
• Suddenly, Trees!
  Nov 20, 2018
• Fight in the Coliseum
  Nov 19, 2018
• A Magical Map
  Nov 18, 2018
• What a View!
  Nov 16, 2018
• Colour Changing Rings
  Nov 16, 2018
• Magic!
  Nov 15, 2018
• Arrival
  Nov 15, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• NeoMareRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  The story itself is good, a bit slow in the beginning, but overall solid. I really like the way in which the author writes the main character, as an actual child (naive, sometimes dense, but brave and really likable).
  The grammar is good, though there is always some room for improvement.
• TachyreasRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Good beginning, slow but steady. I didn't see any grammar error. The story is a bit slow paced as of my current progression (I didn't read everything yet) , it doesn't bother me and I would even say is a relaxing but it may not please everyone.
  The author is taking his time (sorry but I had to do it) but he is not stalling for words, no overly flowery language or filler to bump the counter up but an easily readable and flowing style.
  Btw I don't know why but my review puts 2 stars while I put 3.5
• angryfanRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  I hate this story so much. The main character is the type of impressionable child that would enter a windowless van if a stranger asked him to. He doesn't actually make any decisions for himself. People order him into dangerous situations which he has to survive.
  In the first couple of chapters the MC's guide to the college abandons 2 children in the middle of an infinitely large college and faces no actual repercussions. In another chapter seniors accidentally tie up the MC along with a group of children and almost burn them alive and only have to  apologize. Nobodies actions have consequences or real impact on the story, the author just moves on with the nonexistent plot line.
  There is magic but it isn't actually explained very well and isn't used by the MC until chapter 33 (I had to count since the chapters are not numbered for some reason). You don't really learn about how magic works just what powers, it like  someone explaining to you that gasoline is used to power cars that doesn't really explain how cars work just what powers them.
  The much of the story is filled up with useless information that doesn't have an effect on subsequent chapters. The Mc is a wood carver but none of that is explored instead the MC goes into a dangerous forbidden forest and almost get killed again because people told him to. No one seems to be wise or thoughtful or even plan past the week everyone makes stupid snap desicisions for no reason. This story is so aggravating i am just hoping the MC dies so people don't have to read this story anymore.