The thought of peace

Self-Published

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Description

Major generalRay Brutwas the best military strategist from his country. He had an elder brother who was brutally murdered. After being in shock for some time he went to uncover the mystery about his brother but then he found out the dark secret which lurks deep down the world. This story is about how Ray along with his men overcome the obstacles to change this world’s governing order and take down those who disrupts the universal peace.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Kdanger3398

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 5
Views: 10,417

Chapters(34 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

BullerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It has a fun premise that stopped my tired mind from sleeping, letting me have some musing as I skimmed through the first couple of chapters. Sure, the execution was a bit wonky in the first few parts but it was overall pretty great. Im recommending it overall. 5/5. Good word-variety btw.
DarkMate1Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Unique storyline with another level of imagination...!! It has a really unique character development plot which really instrests me i am looking forward to the next chapters of the stroy...
The use of litterature is really good it makes it a lot more english feel...
The writer must have put quite a work in this story for that i give him a hige round of applause...
Ravisharma@2772Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Its an underrated story the way the characters develop them is vibrant ..
Far from the mushymushy n gigipella stories ,this story blows the friction at another level..
Keep it up, great work must add some more vibrant colors to the story to be more interesting and hypnotizing to read👌👌
prodigyabRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It was a very enjoyable read, and I'm looking forward to reading more chapters.
It actually feels very refined and sophisticated, obviously the author is very well-read.
I binged through all the available chapters in one day, and that's the criteria I use to determine whether a book is good or not. If I read it in one or two sittings, can't get enough of it, want to read more and more, then that's a good book. And this one definitely did that for me.
The time spent reading it was definitely well-spent. It was an experience more than worth experiencing.
I love the protagonist, Ray Brut. Actually, all the characters are very well-written. The mysteries are very intriguing and made me very curious about what hidden secrets are out there in the world, and how the answers will turn out.
The themes are great, changing the world order and bringing peace, that's some classic and awesome stuff. Definitely lots to see and uncover there, it's a world full of questions and mysteries and I really want to see how it unfolds. In the 32 chapters that I've read, there's so much stuff that I can't wait to see how it unfolds, it's like an awesome anime or manga with countless intriguing little elements, love it!
Anyway, to end my review, I must say that I really enjoyed this work, and I'll follow it and keep reading it. I'm very excited to see where it's going, and I think you should give it a chance and read it too.
@GodgamerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
In my opinion this book is very fantastic ..love the suspense and the story curve the writer has drwan in it ..
Overall a good book to read in your precious time ..!!
The characters and the story line is quite amazing and eye catching overall a good book to spend time on !
NocainRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
EDIT: Author takes criticism seriously and works hard on the story (even older parts! --> lets read this and help make this story awesome!)
For me, the story is a blueprint/skeleton/planing Phase for a great story. It seems interesting, but after 3 chapters of being told what is happening I know nothing about the characters.
There is no dialogue and because of that the motivations and characters are unknown. In chapter 3 someone just told him that they need to go to a lab and kill everyone.. they where confused but they where told that its all right and needs to be done .. well that is how much information we got. And a few sentences later we are told that they took someone along because he can control fire... Just like that.