The Technic Master
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Retired Marine who owns a Tech/Arms company gets caught in a System Apocalypse while bringing home more product. Fortunately, he's read a lot of system apoc sci-fi and fantasy!
Note: the cover is a place holder. No idea who the artist is so if said artist wants me to remove it just drop me a message and i will. No questions asked.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- Fortunis Mortis
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.2/ 5.0
- Followers
- 233
- Views
- 15,310
Chapters(8 total)
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Community Reviews(6)
- DarkAetherRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0So people on RRL have all seen the sys apoc done quite a few times and while the author's do a good job of making interesting classes I will have to say that hand's down this series has got a pretty interesting start to the whole damn thing and I am loving it.
- TekknosRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0been looking for a story like this like machine god / rpg stats and stuff like that. please keep up the good work.
- TelRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0There is all of five chapters at the moment, but the writing is phenomenal. It's a rewrite but that just means the author has a plan. The story now is incomparably better than the first version.
The MC is a bit military, some of the fights are David Drake levels of technical weapon specification porn, there is no "te he it's a system novel so no gunpowder", and he owns a military grade gun store.
No worse really than death March for a beginning, and if the author keeps the original broad strokes it's going to get really fun. - DresoviousRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Story is interesting with a few sections that are hard to understand or don't make sense due to the complexity of the actions described and the level/ability of the one doing it. Grammar is the largest concern as reading, but if that gets cleaned up I think it can go far.
- ArahVhelRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0All is in the title. Twas way too fast paced for my tastes before. The rewrite (posted at the end of the first draft) is much better, and tbh it feels like it has been written by someone else. A much more accomplished author
Will be reading more - LandiRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The story looks like a nice powertrip. Though he gets a bit too much, a bit too quickly. What makes it unreadable for me is the mc, that looks and feels like a boor. His attitude change when he deals with situations that involve children feels cheap. Just put there to smoother his selfishness and make him look nicer. Because god forgive me i can be a selfish f***, disregard anyone thats not of my clan, but when you touch children you flip my switch. You can get the feeling of a midwest guy with a pitchfork thats going to protect his women at the first sight of a foregner. Thats how much morale he will have.