The tales and stories of Safra (part of Baratrum)

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An introduction to Safra in the year 1774, The Principality of Silka, colony of Lanheim, city of Lanheim.

Safra is an old smith who moved to Lanheim from the Empire of Khad. Her life's journey has not been easy, but finally at the end of her life she has made it.

Part of my 'Baratrum' Universe.

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2024
Author
The Wildlander

Tags

FANTASYMAGICFEMALE LEADDRAMASLICE OF LIFEMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSSHORT STORYHIGH FANTASY

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  • MaryFlames02Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Not much happens, but the characters come out so alive! I can clearly invision Safra, and Bjorn also.
    Okay so... I didn’t think I’d get THIS into a story about blacksmiths?? But here I am, totally obsessed. Bjorn is such a grump but now I kinda feel bad for him?? And Safra is actually so cool and badass, like I wanna be her when I grow old. The flashback hit me in the feelings and now I’m just sitting here hoping Safra teaches that little girl Frances one day.
    AT the writer: It’s been 9 months since the last update and I’m BEGGING for more. Please don’t leave us hanging!!
    Also, the grammar and writing style are actually really good?? It’s super clear but still emotional, and the way everything is described makes it really easy to picture the scenes. Nothing felt boring or too slow, and the pacing was chill but still kept me reading the whole time.
    Real talk though, this review is almost as long as the scene itself . So keep on writing please.
    One last thing: is this Frances the same one from your other story? Because if so, she is cute.