The Tale of Hurril, The Blind Hunter

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Hurril, a young man recently bestowed the title of Godbound by his revered grandfather, embarks on a journey to uncover his true divine identity. However, with each step he takes toward greatness, formidable enemies emerge from the shadows— fellow godbound seeking to thwart his rise and demonic forces bent on chaos and destruction.

As Hurril grapples with his burgeoning abilities and the weight of his divine power, he must find a way to confront these escalating threats. The challenges he faces will test his resolve, his morality, and the very essence of what it means to be a god. What kind of god is necessary to overcome such formidable adversaries? Explore Hurril's journey, filled with trials, alliances, and revelations, to discover the answer in this captivating tale.

The creation of this book was heavily influenced by The Godbound Tabletop RPG, providing a rich source of inspiration.

Update: Hello Readers! I am revamping my story into a much-improved version, complete with new character names and significant changes. As a result, I will be deleting all of the chapters of this story and then uploading them, new and improved, Thank you for reading the original version flaws and all but with this revamp you will receive the story you deserve

Update: I am putting this story on Hiatus because of the way I wrote it originally there was not clear way to move the story forward without a lot of work and time that I don't have now but I will come back to this story

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2024
Author
Global Pat

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICDRAMASTRONG LEADMALE LEADHIGH FANTASYMYTHOSPROGRESSION

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3.8/ 5.0
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10
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893

Chapters(1 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • aquatofanaRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I enjoyed the premise of the story as well as the setting. Great that the character has their own agency and is actively participating in their own adventure.
    The pacing is a little fast and I would've enjoyed a more description of the characters internal thoughts.
    I liked the story overall.
  • SerasStreamsRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    There is a pretty decent story at play here. An opening that begins with setting up the premise without revealing too much, and then a shift to the future that is done with a little nod to pop culture.
    The largest point of improvement would be in the dialogue. The deity character in Chapter 1 has a distinct voice, but the female character, and the child in the second chapter, both have a similar tone/conveyance of their words.
    I would recommend that, if revisions are made, that the dialogue be revisited.
    A pretty promising-looking start that sets up an intriguing premise. I hope it continues!