The System Wants To Be Human Again (Paused)

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Important note:

I will be temporarily pausing the posting of new chapters for this novel. I don't plan to stop writing it but I have finals coming up and at the recommendation of a few of my friends I am going to find someone to edit each chapter before I release them.

The pause will last around a month and a half until finals have passed, In the meantime, I will still be writing chapters so when I start posting again expect many, longer, better quality chapters.

I know that I have only been posting for a week but I feel that due to my inexperience the quality suffers and I want this idea to work.

I am sorry to all of those who have enjoyed the novel so far, I just hope that you can forgive me on this one.

Thanks,

Man Of Culture

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Melvin Hawkins had a pretty good life ahead of him, as a rich businessman at the head of a massive company he had everything that he could have wished for.  He had more money than he could ever hope to spend, he was feared and respected, anything that he could ever dream of was at his fingertips.

Even with all that money he was still a mortal and gods have a tendency of getting bored…

[*Ding* ]

[System Manager Installed]

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Hello this is the author speaking, this is the first novel that I have ever writen so please excuse poor writning quility at the start and any grammar mistakes.

I encourage suggestions and feedback.

Release schedule: Paused

Chapters(4 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • GhostlinRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    We've got tons of novels with a system here on RRL, this appears to be one of them, but in this case, the system is the MC. As I haven't seen this done before, I'm very interested in how it turns out as a story.
    As of chapter 4:
    Style: Seems good so far, but I think the author is still experimenting with his style.
    Grammar: I wouldn't call it flawless, but it's not off by much. Sentence pattern is not complex and fairly basic. Which makes it easy to read.
    Characters: Can't say much about that at this point.
    Chapters could be a bit longer, 14 pages Splitt into 4 chapters really isn't much.