The System's Harvester

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

Her name isEvren Lestir, a young woman who, at the lowest point in her life, was presented with an opportunity; something that would either let her correct her degraded self, or end it.

It was something called, The System.

With bright blue panels that floated in the air, and deceivingly simple messages, The System presented itself as an escape from reality. It presented people with the chance to visit worlds of magic and monsters that could be explored endlessly while working to complete missions, collect upgrades and gear, and in turn make yourself stronger.

It was just like a videogame.

But unfortunately, reality is never so straightforward.

"This must be hell... Even if I stomp the ground and shatter the planet's crust, all I get is a warning or a reward from the system, and get sent to the next world..."

It was a trap. One that would trap her until she died.

Or at least.. that's what it's creators intended.

Traditional LitRPG system panels are kept to an ABSOLUTE minimum

Tags: Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci-fi, Isekai, Light LitRPG

Sub Tags: Magic, Female Lead, (Extremely) OP Protagonist

This novel takes place in the same universe as my other novel, TDOD (The Dragon of Dreams)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Commander843

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 394
Views: 145,031

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Community Reviews(3)

LikeSolidRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I just started reading this when it hit 15 chapters, and if im honest, I'm super pleased with the story. The Mc is relatable, and written very well. The other characters in the story mesh great and never seem overbearing or that the story has to bend to fit them. I'm a giant fan of the overpowered stuff, and I hope you continue to write this story.
Time for the official review-
Style:
The style of writing is very nice. Pleasant to read, not all spaced out, but not too much words in one place either. The system windows were well placed and the style seemed consistent throughout the chapters. Didn't hurt my eyes, and it paced the story well. 4.5/5.
Grammar:
The grammar was really great. I only spotted a few parts where other words could have made more sense, but English is a funny language and its all authors choice anyway. No complaints from me. The punctuation was perfect, and I honestly couldn't see any mistakes. Keep it up, 4.5/5.
Story:
Intriguing, and absolutely well written. The story sucked me in and brought me into the story. With the impeccable word choice and the descriptions of the environment, I felt like I was living through the character. Very well done. The story is only fifteen chapters in, and there is already multiple leads to lore that we don't know at the moment, hints to new factions or characters we haven't met yet, and facets that keep revealing themselves every chapter! So exciting! 5/5.
Character:
Said it before, ill say it once again. Relatable. If you lived 500 years, lived through hell, came back smiling, and then got put into a worse hell, of course you break somewhere along the way. Too many "Edgy Mc" stories are circulating, and im glad that this Mc can smile, and seems to actually have a sense of humor, even with the stuff she had been through. I love all the side characters and the potential for any future characters. 5/5.
Thank you Commander843 for writing this story, your doing amazing. Anyone reading this, do
hcpsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Amazing idea and story so far only problem is in the first and second chapter you made some panels to big, and now the are cropped off. And the thing that your using for thoughts is a bit hard to see so maybe something like this * * instead of this - -
luda305Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
Two major misleading points. First, the synopsis doesn't describe what the story is about. Rather, that's all the stuff that happened offscfeen before the story. The story appears to be about the protagonist returning to Earth and accidentally starting a new apocalypse. Second, LITRPG panels are like 25%. That is not minimal.
Beyond that, the pacing is slow, the style is like a Japanese light novel, and the grammar makes it hard to read.
If you're big into returnee stories, this might suit you.