The Symptoms

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Description

Once you have it, you can't get rid of it. Everything has fallen and the only things left are the savage beasts and a social hierarchy. Blair has lived her whole life in the slums, surviving off of scraps and risks her life just to get paid. When sudden news about her employer arrives, she just wants to save her employer from his execution, trying to shake off a newfound 'friend' who's not supposed to be on her side. But, now this disease is putting Blair at risk of becoming a beast too. She is met with an impossible decision. Turn herself in, or go rogue. Blair suddenly realizes the truth of her undoing, but will that give her enough time to save herself from her own insanity?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Brin_Studios

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Rating: 2.5/ 5.0
Views: 2,576

Chapters(17 total)

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Heyo_55Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Awesome story so far! Just a few edits here and there and you'll be golden! I'm sure you're working really hard. Blair is a very interesting character and her views on life fit her very well considering where she grew up. This world that you have created with these very unique characters is something that not a lot of people can do. Also, for every chapter or part that you make, you make a cliffhanger, which is a very good way to make the reader want more. The details are amazing and as long as you keep writing, things will come more naturally and not seem so awkward. Your writing is awesome and you seem very professional in the way you write, not to mention your grammar is very good and I was surprised to find next to 0 mistakes. It seems like this story will be quite a long one considering that you have a bunch of stuff in line to post and scheduled, and by way that this story is going, you seem to have barely let us see the surface and it keeps readers attentive. Make sure that if you want to do it in the past tense, that you keep it in the past tense, but I hardly see any issues with that. Good work and keep it up, because you have me hooked!