The Summoned Prince
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Description
Meet Elden Mitchell nicknamed Prince by his friends due to his green eyes and long blonde hair, He is also one of the few modern day swordsman who inherited his father's techniques but together with his class is summoned to another world.Like all my other works this is a first draft :/
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Cpt.Ratchet
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 196
- Views
- 74,087
Chapters(15 total)
- Volume 2-5.5:The hero we needJan 11, 2016
- Volume 2-5: Into the abyssDec 27, 2015
- Volume 2-4.5: FelkaDec 26, 2015
- Volume 2-4: LuckyNov 7, 2015
- Volume 2-3:OgreOct 17, 2015
- Volume 2-2: DungeonOct 12, 2015
- Volume 2-1: Dinner partyOct 2, 2015
- Volume 2-0: PrologueSep 20, 2015
- Volume 1-6: EpilogueSep 20, 2015
- Volume 1-5: Ceremony of blood(continued) part 2Sep 17, 2015
- Volume 1-4: Ceremony of bloodSep 16, 2015
- Volume 1-3: GoblinsSep 10, 2015
- Volume 1-2: Honeyed wordsSep 4, 2015
- Volume 1-1:Where's my Loli-archmage?Aug 30, 2015
- Volume 1-0: Prologue :A teenage hoboAug 28, 2015
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Community Reviews(5)
- DanceHunterRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Hopefully there is no treason in their peer group, which was already way too, but it's your story. And I hope also that the class is a completely guerraro, I have nothing against the war wizards, but I rather like those who specialize. Hopefully more chapters and thanks.
- SheldonFor19Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Gunna make it short and sweet, I love the direction and it seems like it will be entertaining if he ever decides to drift away from the pack. Keep it up :)
- KyrenoxRoyal Road★★★ 2.5First things first, I will say that I consider Ratch a good Internet friend. And I assume vice versa. However, I will attempt to not let this influence me too much. Though, this review will still be opinionated… Hopefully not too much…
The Story! Not really much here so far. Nothing has really happened, though some stuff has been set up. However, since an entire “volume” has gone by, I would have liked for something to have happened. More soon, first let’s get to characters.
The main character is named Elden. He is a tall, attractive man with long blonde hair. However, he is also poor and is referred to as a “hobo” (Just a side note, Elden does seem to have a home and also recently seems to have boughten a watch. So it’s more that he looks like one, but isn’t one… maybe). Elden was raised by his alcoholic father in the way of the sword. This has yet to be fully explained WHY exactly his father did this, but I expect a reason will pop up sooner or later. Elden is an apparent sword prodigy.
The other characters that have been introduced are his two friends, an Ikeman named Paul, and an enchantress who is the daughter of the king. So far, one of Elden’s friends seems to be an Otaku type character that is extremely creepy, and the other I don’t remember at all. Honestly, I could be mistaken that Elden has more than one friend. That’s how flat the characters are, all of them seem to lack substance. Now, Paul is a classic Ikeman. He’s handsome, has buxom beauties following him in his own personal harem, and is one of the stronger “heroes”. The enchantress I only remember because I found what she was doing interesting. More on that when I get back to the story.
Back to the Story! The plot is a classic “high school class gets transported to a fantasy world”. So far at least. There is even the status plate that seems to wiggle its way into these transported stories. One of the interesting things is that the king is basically forcing the “heroes” to train. There is segregatio - kilaske990Royal Road★★★ 2.5SPOILER ALERT!
MC is OP which is awesome.
I seriously thought he would be a smart conniving son of a b*itch, but as the story progressed he just becomes more naive and it’s infuriating.
Also hate the fact that he still hates his father’s teaching after using the techniques taught to him to save his life.
Knew that they are being used and also being charmed, but still doesn’t do anything about it. I get the fact that they might go against the nation or something, but still, I’m pretty sure that the MC who killed the 4th general, who is capable of destroying the kingdom itself, could use it as intimidation.
but seriously, the naivety part is just making me want him to actually be beat or berrayed already so he can get off his high horse. Also knowing the fact that people are just currying his favor and actually likes it(superiority complex) makes me think he is disgusting and I hope he dies. - TriangleKayes08Royal Road★ 0.5But i feel like reading this is taxing on my soul. There is practically nothing unique or original here and the grammar is fairly cruddy. I would normally just give it 1-2 stars but reading this makes me hate myself for reading something this....mediocre.