The Subject
Self-Published
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Description
I live in a dull world, a world where I am only comforted by the warmth of the liquids that suspends me, and my thoughts. Aside from my thoughts there is also a clear wall, I do not know the name for, that acts as my container, and display to the other world. Beyond, in the other world, are these things.-First few lines from the first chapter-Alright, excuse me for my bad naming sense, and description creating sense! This will be about 'The Subject' on a unique earth. I will reveal the circumstances of this earth as the story progresses! So, bear with me!EDIT: Excuse the hand drawing I used for the image, but I do not own a drawing tablet or drawing software, sadly.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Fabulous Stranger
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- Rating
- 4.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 1,092
Chapters(8 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- fireworksguyRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0this is different and I like it its not the usual summon to another world, or VR fiction, its a change of pace in a good way! Please continue this fiction!
- UrobrouSRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0From reading the 1st chapter, I can tell that the grammar is quite good (keep it up or I'll find where you live), story seems somewhat thought out, all in all, quite interesting!
how rare are the gate books?
how was the world affected?
MC's background?
you want the next chapter to be an expository chapter where you dump that info on the reader, but do it skillfully - an info dump can make or break a new story.
Also, use excel to keep track of the abilities of the hero, and keep some prefab tables around to make your own life easier.
may the royalroadl.com gods watch over you.