The Strange Man
Self-Published
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Description
This is a short story from a book I am currently in progress writing. I wanted to release a little taste of it and see what feedback I get.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- MrSoopy
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 201
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The story is one that presents itself in a bit of an unconventional way, with the strange man having to be revealed and then only at the end the identity is all but confirmed. The narrative pacing is uneven, but the prose is basic and straightforward. The issue is not the readability of the piece, but in the structure and focus. As the conclusion hits, the piece snaps into focus and yet the story does not feel fully complete. It was interesting and while unconventional, it does work.