The Story Of A Man Named Bandi
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
go down this weird, funny and bizarre adventure down in the forest with bandi!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- BandiTheNewbie
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Views
- 922
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- DBCRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0wow this is cool i guess
i bet the bunny's bread was poison
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- VltimarkRoyal Road★ 0.5The stories are quite short and its mostly character dialogue try putting a bit more of narration. The other option is detailing everything more and using unique words like example you keep repeating Bandi. Instead you could say "the young man" or "the progtaginist" or "the adventurer" hope it helped.