The Story In Our Star

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Description

A story of a dimension traveling protagonist adventuring and doing amazing heroic and adventurous like stuff in the stories in order to reach godhood.

I couldn’t be any more wrong. This is a story of a true scientist. Story of a dark lord, the story of a cosmic horror, and the story of a god.

Cultivation? Enlightenment? Comprehension?Nonsense.

The protagonist first and foremost is a scientist. A true scientist.

While others are busy slowly building themselves up and getting stronger with luck and fights, our protagonist has none of that. Nothing but science, math and logic.

So what does a mad scientist do after achieving godhood? That’s the real fun of the story. The MC essentially torments entire universes.

Whole universe becomes his experimental field, he plays with them for millions and billions of years in various timeline and parallel realities.

All for the sake of experiment.

He destroys world after World and initiates Mass genocide of entire races.All for the sake of science.

The story isn’t it actually about the MC doing stuff, it’s actually about the rest of the universe is trying to stop the MC in a desperate attempt to challenge fate and overcome the control of God Almighty himself.

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Ace-omi

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 50
Views: 48,983

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Community Reviews(5)

Evy the goddessRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The Evolution of a God: Rico's Quest for Ultimate Victor is a must-read for fans of world-building and unique character journeys. The grammar is perfect. Some reader have had trouble with style which I think flow perfectly well and the story more than makes up for it with its captivating plot. The tension in the story arises from Rico’s quest to build and rule his world as a new god. The pacing may be a bit fast, but the world-building is top-notch and the progression of the world is realistic. The main character, Rico, is an intriguing figure, who takes on the role of a god with nonchalance and develops super-human abilities throughout the story. Written mostly in first person, Rico proves to be a solid god, with a sense of humor. The story is well worth the read for those who love world building!
They style of the story is slow-paced but always seem like so much is happening.
Overall is a unique and thought-provoking story that delve into philosophy. The auther use some mythology as reference such as the name of the world and others instances to adds dept and richness.
Nsimon801Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Since I have the attention span of a gold fish I'm afraid i had to push myself throguh ceretain portions of this fiction, but thats on me as a reader not the author. Overall highly recomend if you enjoy detail-rich fiction and world buidling!
Style score- the author third person narrative does a great job painting the big picture for the reader, while establishing what the protagonist is going through. Rico is an observer, on a querst to godhood, and so as the reader you are experieicng this deep and well thoguth world through the protagonists eyes. Very well done!
Story score: as mentioned above I had to push myself through at times. Personally I do prefer more fast paced fiction, so again this is personal bias. If you are like me, this may not be for you, however I must stress that if you enjoy a slow burn, well thoguth out plot with good cuase and effect, this is definiely for you! Ricos progesssion is substantial, and viewing the cradle and worlds through the inqwuisitive mind of a scientist is very interesting!
Grammar score: clearly edited and peer vetted, I saw little to no mistakes. If I missed some, it is largely due to the fact I am not a grammar nazi nor an english major so if you are either of these things you may find more mistakes than I did. Bearing that in mind, I found the fiction to flow very well, and the writing style to be smooth and easy to folllow.
Character score: I would describe Rico as absent minded, not truly in the present. Imagine a serach enginge with like ten tabs open, all playing audio, while simultianously the first tab is deeply anaylaysign microscopic details abouts being cosnumed by carnivours earthworms, which is an abnormality. I don't know if the author was tyring to acuratley enbcapsulate the inner maginations of a neruo divergent person, but they most certainly succeed. Well done!(?)
Overral: well written, enaging, slow burn, detail heavyu, if this is somethign you are looking for then highly recomend!
Caren vermillionRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
If you are wondering if this small first chapter is worth your time it is, the author has quiet the interesting writing style that enjoy it is confident and audacious, I personally like it quiet a lot the way the paragraphs are laid out is perfect top notch I read without feeling overwhelmed by words or such things which is quiet common even in the top scoring royal road stories, I would say that it lacks a nice main character but the the introduction to him does te job in a way, now where the story is exactly going I wonder the possibilities are infinite and that really is exiting me.
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primordial _PhoenixRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Really enjoying it. Kind of letdown that the first species is human I was hoping it would be may be angels/Demons or even elves or dragons.
But I assume that's because the MC doesn't have enough knowledge to create those species
and I hope this story is finished because I seriously enjoy world building novels
TosangRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I dont have much too say , ley get straight too the review :
1st . The Story : yet Creation God mc away intrigued me . Still many left me disappointment (Mostly Chinese one) . Still Some is like a bright star (yet , still a Chinese one). So reading this give me much hope.
2nd : Mc is in his early stage , he didnt became apathetic or pull out some random God mask. He still consume by his godly Power but then casted it aside. In a sense ,he does look like a Mortal gain the power of God. His Family setting while seem both convenience also bring some logic troubles so that maybe a minus.
3rd : The world building is kinda good till now , from basic to basic . I hope Author can prove gimself when the Sentinel Species come out.
4th Tye style is not the best , Many words being repeat a lot. Some part seem akward too read. I wont comment about grammar since i sure nor good at it.
Update : The writing Style is kinda Bad , lot of repeating contents just like some Chinese Novels
All in All , i hope more chaps will come out this one to rise soon . Hope this wacky review of mine help. TFTNovel😇😇😇