The Sons Unknown

This was what I wrote four years ago in eighth grade, but I'm posting it out as a sort of remembrance. It involves a boy dealing with the loss of a dead brother while also finding himself in the midst of a dangerous mystery. I think I got better at structuring diaglogues and building characters in eighth grade. There are many things I like about the story, the pace, the losses experienced by the protagonist, and some more. There are some romantic scenes that are being dealt with in a very awkward way, but hey I was in eighth grade, please don't be judgy :).