The Snake Immortal

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(Unless there are real life issues, chapters are planned for release every 2 to 4 days. 5 days if I get writer's block.)On a planet where cultivation reigns, one magical beast defied all odds and reached the crossroad to ascension to the Immortal Realm. However, it decided to be reborn and start cultivation anew as it feared the unknown.The Heavens respected its choice and it was reborn from a woman's womb a thousand years after its soul underwent the transformation. With a new life as a human, he embarks on the path of cultivation once more.Just one question remained: why was such an option available alongside ascension?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2015
Author
Silver Trance

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURETRAGEDYMARTIAL ARTSSCHOOL LIFEPSYCHOLOGICALHORROR

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Rating
4.5/ 5.0
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1,524
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693,444

Chapters(32 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • zeldaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Great potential. Grammar is very good indeed. I love about the MC though, his mental transformation, not an animal anymore. Consist of both eastern mage story type and chinese xianxia story type. Overall this is one of the story that I'm waiting everyday for a new chapter to pop up.
  • Forsaken EmperorRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The writing style is decent but the story is what  i truly enjoy about this novel. Without a doubt this is one of the best reads on royal road especially in regards to the tags (Mature and Drama). I only found this last night and could not stop myself from reading it straight into the morning and catching up with the latest release. I truly hope you never stop writing this story and that you don’t try to rewrite it. It is a great story as is and nobody can make a perfect one. Sure they can be some little improvements but it already has the potential to be mentioned along with great Xianxia novels such as Coiling Dragon and Martial God Asura. And if you like this story you will also like those; both start of slow although they are not reincarnation stories like this but the character have a similar vile and conniving persona.
    I am looking forward to reading more of this in the days to come. Keep up the good work. The MC is perfect as he is and his views make me realize that people truly know how to act in such a world. People who find the character to evil are naive to think that a kind person can survive in such a world were the strong reigns. Also if you want he could be more villainous but he can stay as is. I do enjoy how you joined his human and beastly emotions to complete him and make way for certain decision he may make in the future and also possible changes in how he relates to his siblings. Great Story and will definitely read again.
  • QwertymanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a great story there is a great idea and just waiting for more!!!
  • silkieRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    one of the best ive read on here keep up the great work
  • CeruleanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The story is amazing and you already have two things I love 1.reincarnation 2.xianxia like story definitely one of my top 3 story's alreadt
  • SammaelRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    All the hate of the main character is annoying.
    I don't like those types of bowing whittles cowards that will kiss everyone ass types of characters, those that will try to be a floor rag.
    Only for a pat, and praise of being a "good boy" as if they would be nothing more than a pet that has to do everything that master wishes.
    This is probably the reason why it enrages me, that some reviews give only half point to the character cryteria.
    For f*cks sake don't like than stfu and gtfo. There are many novels with pathetic whimps as mc, so why the f*ck do you have to read this one? Only  to give the author half a point?
    The mc is evil, the mc is psyhopath, bla bla bla. You don't like than gtfo.
    Name one reason why the author should change his story or rewrite it couse you don't like the mc?
    The author isn't your b.... and will do what he wants not what we want or hope. You wish for something than write a letter to Santa.
    One of the reasons author shouldn't yeld to such yapping is that we as readers are nothing more than parasites and leeches.
    I don't write reviews, mainly couse, I don't have qualifications to write something that isn't biased.
    But when  I see/read comments that have somethings that would be written only by conceited brat with inflated ego it makes my inner Cthulhu rage.
    I have nothing to add, other than the story is good, style and grammar when compared with other works here is on the level of heavenly. Character is awesome. Whats wrong with being an evil psyhopath?
    You write he is an assh*le, an evil being, for no reason. I ask having your mother murdered and eaten in your presence isn't enough to be like he is?  Dear sir / madam Nolfavrell  your arguments are inconsistent. One line you write that he is evil, enjoys commiting crimes while habing a grin. A bit further you write about survival of the fittest, law of jungle.
    Why should he yield to some mortal laws and behaviour, that are practiced by weaklings, in a world where everyone takes what they want
  • CruxioRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Great Story!! Love it!! Already re-read it 3 times in one go lol. I have to say that this is refreshing. Most xianxia novels are just cut out from MGA or CD.
    You have to clear out those grammar mistakes though. This story is riddled with it. I can still understand the thought of your sentence but you used words not usually associated with it. Maybe a PR would be appropriate.
  • fuel2rockRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Yeah the new Lance is boring I don’t like his change he should have killed the woman in the bath and the auction servant poisoned all the pirates and passengers killed the slave girl and told mei to go to hell the story started off great but Lance had an unnecessary change that completely changed the story diverting from the original direction. I can’t say I give this a high rating. The grammar and flow of the story is execllent so 3 ?’s is what I give it
  • MyuymRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    I've read the first 20 chapters at the time of writing this review.
    I think the writer has the potential to write an good story. Because both his writing style is pleasant and his grammar good. The story isn't that good since it is build for a large part on the biggest flaw in the story. The main character, The main character is an asshole, has no redeeming qualities, is a psychopath, and that takes the story down. The character is one of the worst ones I've read in a long time. I wouldn't recommend this to anyone.
  • NamerRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    The story started off differently to other  xianhuans. The fact it involved a powerful snake deciding instead of ascending to be reborn into a human. I like the fact you have built some tension with the choice. However the main characters personality was very selfish which is understand able. He didn't justify it with an argument which is nice. However what were you thinking when you had the mc change is character from a cold and selfish person into a nice person who dislikes killing. The justification for the change was stupid. "He accepted his human side". It doesn't work like that. Your personality can slowly change after exposure to certain actions or quickly have a extremely traumatic event however neither of those happened. Unless his sisters nagging counts as a extremely traumatic event. The story has other interesting events however your tendency to ignore people or features or forget about them is frustrating.