The Skeleton King

Self-Published

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Description

Boy and his whole class got killed by the suicide bomber,but their soul's are summoned to a new world by the humans with the help of light god for them to be their champions/heroes.Except for our main protagonist.AN: new pls go easy on me ^^PS: I don't own the pic i just find it cool ^^

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
BRabbitt

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
373
Views
93,701

Chapters(11 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • Encroaching DeathRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Nothing to do with the story but it the question still stands. I know I should be focusing on writing my won works in my little spare time however this as just to amazing to pass up. I wish you the best of luck writing the story but really… can the skeleton king get a boner? Not even sure where the question came from but in the back of my mind it just stood out so I am confused as to if he is still one with his little friend or not. I mean this thing does have a romance tag so…. well It is just something from that dark corner of my mind. Good work.
  • addmolitionRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    You received 4 stars for having a skeleton king and 1 star for having cruel mc.
  • belgrave123Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    love the story you are writing especially the mc
  • kris909Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    the story is awesome and i realy think iam in love with the story. keep up the good work
  • SaphyronRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    There are a lot of grammar mistakes, but other than that this is a very interesting story that I’ll follow to see where it is going. Keep up the good work.
  • The_Fighting_GodRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    dont stop lol this is entertaining maybe get a proofreader
  • Winter_CrowsRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a tale of a man that is going in all the directions you except him to as what he is, and you love him for  it
    Read this novel something tells me you’ll like it
  • PartyBoyRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Keep it up bruh. I love it  so far. Get a proof read for your grammar .
  • TralliERoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The story is awsome with a good dark twist to the summoning genre. Not to bad in the grammatical sence wither but the author completely slaughters the common comma.
  • TheGrayZRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I'd like to rate this higher, but something is stopping me...
    1. Style: The PoVs seem to be fairly erratic. For example, you had the 1st person PoV of the rebel general, or an officer or something, but without any warning suddenly you're using a 3rd person PoV for the black skeleton captains? You might want to work on that.
    2. Story: The story is fine. The pace is a tad fast - the rebellion arc here could of gone on for a bit longer. No big reason as to why just feel like it could of gone on for another 3 or 4 chapters.
    3. Grammar: It started off fine. But I feel as your pace of releasing the chapters is greatly reducing the quality of the grammar. Misplaced punctuation, missing capital letters, other elementary errors. You might want to consider working on that a little bit. I can understand what's going on just fine, but the quality needs some improvement.
    4. Character: It's unfair to judge this so early, so I'm just saying 3 stars. I hope interactions between Connor and the princess will improve his outlook on humans, if only a little bit.
    All in all, just opinions. Keep up the work Mr. Author.
    -TheGrayZ