The Sekiryuutei's younger brother

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Description

What would happen if you reincarnated in the anime you hate the most?

What would happen if you reincarnated as the younger brother of the protagonist of that anime?

What if, you hadSaitama level Cheat skillsand a fair amount of loose screws?

Well this is the story...

English is not my native language, so be patient.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
Luixto_Miroku

Tags

FANTASYANTI-HERO LEADCOMEDYTRAGEDYMULTIPLE LOVERSPSYCHOLOGICALREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.2/ 5.0
Followers
56
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43,722

Chapters(66 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • Ethenia VermillionRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The plot premise itself is interesting and I want to see it explored more. The plot has been riding the edge since the first chapter, it’s juuust within the realm of interesting and entertaining, but I can see it quickly going downhill and become a horrible mess.
    Characters are mostly two dimensional so far, with very stereotypical archetypes or traits. I can see the main characters improving, there have been moments where they show some promise.
    The main issue with this story is the grammar. Chapter 50-60 does get somewhat better, but the grammar is horrible. It seems that the author has not used any tools at all to fix the grammar. There are so many he/she mistakes, where in the span of 1 sentence the same person has been called both pronouns multiple times. Speech is marked with — at the start instead of normal quotation marks. The grammar is mostly headache inducing as you have to decipher the actual meaning.
    Overall it’s a very stereotypical OP self insert fanfiction, I’d assume the author is young based on the characters and lore, as it’s very edgy and extreme. MC is, as described in the story, Saitama levels OP, if not more. The romance is….there? I have less issues with this harem style than I typically would. MC is one to voluntarily fall to bad instincts and craves carnal pleasure, but he is realistic and doesn’t just grab women because they’re pretty or he’s horny, that’s where the oldest profession in the world comes in.
    I’m not sure why I stubbornly read everything published, but I would not recommend reading this unless all the current chapters are updated with proofreading.
  • K4ffeeRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Alright first of i do like the overall style of the story an absolutely broken madman with a ton of problems in DxD so far so good.
    Now the bad or the really bad depends on who you're asking, i have a hard time concentrating thanks to my ADHD brain so everytime there is an error my brain focuses on that and there are 3 main issues that just haunt the story and make it near unreadable for me :
    No.1: General sentence structure, though less of an issue for me thanks to reading enough MTL Novels but it still can be difficult to read at times.
    No.2: He/She errors, honestly that just throws my brain out for whatever reason and it wouldn't be that much of a problem if it wasn't in pretty much every chapter, talking to a girl and calling her "He" then saying "Her" and switching to "She" and in the next chapter talking about MC and calling him "Her" or "She" with some "He" or "Him" thrown in for good measure.
    No.3: And that one just annoys me to no end Names being written wrong constantly it wouldn't be an issue if it wasn't a fanfiction it woudln't be an issue if the names used couldn't just be googled in 5 sec to check how it's written but it both is a fanfiction and the names used can be googled in 5sec and the excuse of "English isn't my native language" just doesn't count, it is pure and simple laziness.
    And none of the issues should be taken as an insult or me saying you shouldn't write but please reread your chapters after the first write and maybe reread them again before posting or send them to someone to proof-read it for you because i genuinely like the concept of what i've read so far i just can't read further because i get headaches while doing so.
  • Naruto182Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    i like the concept enough to slog though but this reads like it was machine translated from a language that doesn't specify gender pronouns except by context please please get a beta reader to fix this other than that like I said good story, good concept, and decent main character