The Second Divine

Self-Published

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Description

if you could do anything you want to, will you even have anything you that want to have? this story follows a young boy who through various events got the power of an almighty god, only to find out that immortality and endless power isnt all its cracked up to be. will he become the saviour of everything or its ender? will he warp reality or  let it be? what is reality to begin with? join him in his philosphical search for answers and adventures far beyond your wildest dreams because everything is possible, especially when you control everything.

Note : This is my first novel written ages ago and i have matured since then (back then i only read light novels)

Its not edited cause honestly i cant bring myself to read something i already know whats gonna happen in, so yeah alot of typosThe chapters are long as hell so yeah treat them as multiples (i mean by the end of chapter 3 its 10k words)

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • DeityNSRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    i love the whole idea but, edit it please. also too much dialogue. i see a few holes in the plot tho but seeing as this is your first attempt ill let it slide, i needed to focus to read this so that shows how badly this needs editing but
    the characters despite feeling all over the place arent too cliched. the novel isnt boring to read and i think thats pretty much why anyone would want to read anything i feel like the scope is too small tho and the focus on the rock planet thingy is weird for how diverse this could be but i guess thats to be expected from only 6 chapters?