The Saiyan Immortal

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

Its the eave of the destruction of Planet Vegeta, a saiyan couple are in the nursery looking upon their child when they hear from Bardock of the incoming destruction and send their child off.

Unfortunately the child never reached his destination as a space tear appeared in the pods trajectory and landed him in a world unlike any in the dbz universe.

Read on as our unlikely protagonist grows strong in this world of kill or be killed.

ps: I write this as something of a hobby. Its literally the first time I write a series. If you have constructive criticism go ahead. consider this a very rough draft. I also decided to put it up on Webnovel.

I do not own DRAGONBALL. DragonBall is Owned by TOEI ANIMATION, Ltd. and Licensed by FUNimation Productions, Ltd.. All Rights Reserved. DragonBall, DragonBall Z, DragonBall GT and all logos, character names and distinctive likenesses thereof are trademarks of TOEI ANIMATION, Ltd, Fuji TV, Akira Toriyama, FUNimation.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
thebored25

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMARTIAL ARTSNON-HUMAN LEAD

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
61
Views
30,416

Chapters(13 total)

Reviews

No reviews yet. Be the first to share your thoughts!

Community Reviews(1)

  • KaiserMoonRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The story is a good one with no major flaws, it just isn't an amazing story. Though the story does have potential.
    Some of the minor flaws include weird formating issues like spaces where there shouldn't be any and things of that nature. There are other minor mistakes like weird wording and things that could be fixed by a proofreader but they don't happen to often.
    There are also some cliche things (NO spoilers) but it has some originality.
    If you're still hesitant to read it, then I suggest reading the first 4 chapters.