The rise of baron bladebreaker

He who see everything,

He who can look in other worlds

He who can learn from anyone without being seen

He is an observer

With his powerfull eyes, what will he do?

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I am not a native english speaker. I hope to improve my english through writting this novel.  I hope that people who are good in grammar to point out repetition, and errors.

Thanks for the help in advance.