THE RELISTAR × REJOINING [EPIC DARK FANTASY]

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[cover by Miblart]

ENTER A NIGHTMARISH WORLD OF GODS AND KINGS, FALSE GODS AND HERETICS...

King Algirak has come to destroy Caloria, the world of the living; he deigns to use the omnipotent artefactDyosiusto rend the world asunder, split the multiverse, and step into the Red Court of the deity Azafel in a contest of power only everdreamtof by the many Etherian Gods presiding over the realms...

There is one chance to stop him, one hope alone — a boy in Caloria, a boy namedCedric Valenkir...But will stopping Algirak be enough to stop the torrent of violence trailing after him? Or will it only serve to expedite it, and to bring more of those ancientSylvet Godsto war?

Only the Hierarchy of Fates can truly know for certain. And Cedric is going to start bybreaking it apart.

The main story is now complete. Finality will release at my own pace as I want it to be meaningful and valuable, full of intent. It won't be long, I suspect. And then we're done.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2024
Author: Jeremy W Recupero

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 203
Views: 58,577

Chapters(139 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

definitelynotcaeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I really enjoy reading the story and the evolution of your writing. The recent chapters have really shown your growth as an author and I feel very invested in the characters and the story! I'm excited to read more and see where it will take you. Thank you for sharing your work!
NedvisorRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Relistar review
I like this story a lot, and in the 11 chapters I have read so far I think there is much there which people will enjoy. The world building as an immense feeling and any who are looking for a deep fantasy adventure full of world ending back drops should give this one a serious look.
Story: We begin with quite a bit of action, so that is excellent for this genre. The story centers around powerful objects known as Relistars which grant the user powers that extends beyond you typical “magic” in fantasy stories. A Relistar seems to be able to change the nature of reality itself and is paired with an all powerful being to boot. The main character is quickly introduced alongside his Relistar partner and we get introduced to the wider story fairly fast. I found very few if zero slow points in the chapters I have read so far.
Writing: I am pleased to say that the writing is a couple notches above what you usually find on this website. The author clearly has a lot of talent with exposition, and his vocabulary is advanced enough that I saw few words being too often repeated. However, I did feel that the writing overshadowed some of the moments where a more clearer explanation of events would have been helpful. Numerous times, despite the competently written sentences, I was very confused as to where the characters were, what was happening, and generally what was going on. Usually these moments were brief but it would be nice if the author could be a bit more clear in certain sections. I found this happening much more in the last 4 chapters I read.
Grammar: This part was quite flawless! I didn’t see anything really that needed correction. Perhaps I wasn’t looking too hard, but I think the author has clearly spent a lot of time going over his work and looking for the spelling and grammar issues.
Characters: I think this has been my favorite part, aside from the writing in general, and one which I think will only become better. The main character and his Relistar