The Reincarnated Villainess Assassin Only Wanted Friends (Progression, Villainess)

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(Cover Image was commissioned by @ziachiart)

I was always sickly. Due to my sickly nature, I have never been to parties, nor befriended anyone. All that I could do was simply reading comics or watching videos on hospital beds. And so, my life perished at the young age of 16 years old with no friends nor family beside me.

However, I somehow got transported into the body of a ten-year-old girl. This body was healthy! I could play all day long. My simple dreams of going to school, playing with friends, and having a relationship are no longer a dream! Yay!

i found out later that I was not simply isekai'd, but I was reincarnated into Elidranthia! a super villainess of a novel I read!

The sequel has arrived!

Reincarnated as the Villainess’s Maid: I Won’t Let Her Become a Murderer!:https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/112376/reincarnated-as-the-villainesss-maid-i-wont-let

(Yes. the link is correct. it didn't cut off.)

Winner of October 2023 Royal Road Writhathon Challenge

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2023
Author: Laulau20

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 1,234
Views: 496,877

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Community Reviews(10)

GspRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Not bad, but there is a very important disadvantage. The royal family, in particular, the second prince, is just the apotheosis of irritation. In general, everyone in the royal family, except for my sister, is a complete jerk. They just take it and do what they want. Without asking anyone anything, and then they're surprised that they're having an uprising? They even allow an organization like the Reapers to exist, which is total nonsense. And the father? How cool, let's marry the main character off without her asking, she'll be so happy, just fine. And the heroine herself? Well, let's be passive, it's like choosing a person against your will with whom you continue to live. Yes, if you disobey the king's orders and force him to cancel this engagement, you will have no place in high society, but is it necessary at all? You have power, you have company, and you will have money, why do you need a prince? So that what? Such a disappointment. To be honest, I actually came to read about a kind psychopath, not romantic nonsense. I wouldn't mind having an affair with Alicia, he's here, but the prince? A guide on how to ruin a normal plot with your fantasies about princes:
Cria de ElfoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The MC is a girl with a great heart suffering from psychopathy. But she's not a bad person, she's actually friendly and tries hard to overcome her stigma by being naturally intimidating. Along with all this, she has a good progression of power through her skills. In general, the work is very cool. I recommend reading 😁👍
SomeBSDeityRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So we have an entertaining tale of an MC who doesn't want to become the villain but keeps doing things that would lead to her eventually being the villain. Love the crazy psycho girl though she is awesome and I would say adorable if that wouldn't lead to me getting stabbed.
FantasyScienceRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
A very cute story that worth a shot. As of this (fairly early) read it comes off great. The world seems well built but not yet explored. The characters are well written, and the main character is such a wonderful character. They just want friends, but their talents seem to make it hard. They could have more communication between characters though. A decent chunk of the problems so far could have been solved by just explaining their feelings to others.
Stonefox01Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
When I started reading I was a bit skeptical just from the title. A “villainess reincarnation” is a well written setting. But the author treats it more like an introduction and does one thing I haven’t seen before. Mainly allude or confirm different ways the protagonist thinks and feels about situations and objects because of the reincarnation. I don’t want to get to specifics but it helped me feel like the character was more grounded, affected by the world, people, and body she has been brought to.
The writing has been overall decent, some times the way paragraphs or thoughts are written feel… plasticky? Not sure, I read not write so sorry for bad feedback. It never got in the way of the story though.
I am looking forward to keeping up with this story as it updates, it’s not even a month old but the story has progressed well and I like the current characters.
DamoelRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Even though I usually dislike politics, from the start until the current point of the story, I'm finding it very enjoyable. Perhaps because it's not extremely complex, I'm even able to read it without many problems at night, when my brain is more than tired. In fact, the story itself is adorned with a lot of slice of life, relationships dynamics and the evolution of the characters.
At first, the story itself, is relatively simple; we get introduced the main protagonist and her goal is clear since the beginning: to make friends. However, as the story goes on, we discover that it's not as easy as it seems, and fate is not so friendly.
The characters are what makes this story enjoyable for me; there are some cute and nice dynamics between them. Easy to digest and sometimes they even put a smile on your face, especially some dialogues expressly made to lighten the mood.
And I'm enjoying it even when english is not really my forte. Really easy to read, although there have been a few times where I found myself facing a five-words sentence where I didn't know four of those words. But this is a "me problem". Just saying that it's fluent enough to understand it anyway.
What prompted me to read this story was especially the "Villainess" part, which made me extremely curious. And it's a really interesting aspect.
Lemon snakeRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Overall, the ideas on the story side are great.
There are good lore elements that we get slowly introduced to and the MC is just your friendly knife fanatic who may from time to time forget to not let the voices take over and go full psycho kind of vibe you know.
I wish her "issues" on the stabby side, gets more developed in further chapters too. It sometimes feels like her berserk state is forced.
Other comment says there should be more communication between characters and many misunderstanding wouldn't happen but in my opinion, it's acceptable.
There is an issue tho, that lessen with time. The pacing is a bit off, the flow of events feels a bit disjointed but nothing too bad. I'm sure, time and writing experience will fix it .
The grammar is not the issue. It's more about the story having the structure of a nice story but lacks the decorations around that makes it shine
If I had to shorten my review, I would say this is a diamond in the rough, and I will keep reading. Let em cook!
Also, me like knives so I have a bit of a bias whelp.
VAMPIRE WHEN? Stop staying in denial c'mon u.u
RscottysBRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Interesting premise but not too well executed. Parts of the story are very good, but other parts just don’t make sense. It’s understandable if the author of the story the world is based on was themselves a moron, but that means the world is based on bad storybook logic and is not a real world that somehow the author observed and recorded (or something). Either ways, it hurt my sensibilities one too many times. Grammar is decent, and characters are 2D but likeable.
Aleah CatRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I want to like this. The idea of the story is interesting, sure. I like the concept of a fated assassin trying to fit in and just live out the things she missed out on in the past. She gets to be as powerful as many people want to see in a series.
I come to an issue with the writing. The grammar is fairly decent. I’m an editor, so I developed a bit of an eye for things. Generally, the punctuation is alright! The spelling is fine, too. I draw the line at the complete lack of consistency with the narration. Often, the story is narrated in past tense AND present tense within the same sentence and it reads really poorly. A bit sloppy, even.
If I received this as a work to edit before publication, it would definitely take me ages to work all these issues out. Normally, RR authors are awful with commas. Not so with this one. Adding or removing a comma is easy. Completely rewriting sentences to ensure every verb is in the correct tense? That’s the stuff of nightmares. It takes ages and basically requires the editor to have ghostwriter credentials just to make sure it still sounds like the same person wrote the story in the end.
Can you enjoy this story with these errors? Sure. But if you’re keen enough to pick up on these things? It might take away from the experience.
Courtyard AliceRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
The premise and plot is decent, but it's undermined by how poor the writing is, rushing through things and overall being very simplistic, especially the dialogue.
Also, why are hundreds of orcs/goblins/trolls suiciding again and again against the human towns (not retreating or improving strategy)? Like, are they somehow even dumber than animals even though they are humanoid?
Though seeing that the protag's family couldn't think of using traps against a dumb enemy you know will attack, maybe that's just how everyone is in this world.
If this is some teen's first foray into writing, pretty respectable, but otherwise yeah.