The Puppeteer

This is my first attempt at writing and English is my second language, so I happily take every ounce of constructive criticism and incoorperate it here just tell me ^^

What would you do if your life goes from bad to worse...but you get the power to controll people?  In a universe full of superheroes?

And what will Jack do with it? Revenge? help People? You will have to read to find out