The Promise of Runes (A LitRPG Progression Apocalypse)

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Description

Follow Zed as he wakes up in a post apocalyptic world with little memory of the past.

Time teaches him that the world is not what it's supposed to be. He will face monsters, meet people with the power to call on fire and light with the sound of their voice and simple gestures, and sieve through memories he isn't certain even belong to him.

In the end, he must regain the memories that belong to him and find a new purpose, all while showing no affinity for magic. At least not in the fashion everyone commands.

This story has weak to strong MC elements.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: The First Observer

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Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(10)

sjnRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
before I go on, I'll just like to point out that I've been reading this work for a while now and only now decided to make an account because of how good it is. I mean it's just that good.
I'll start with the story. The concept of an amnesiac main character is a trope I tend to enjoy but the concierge has taken it and beautified it. The memory loss is not complete and leaves him with enough to patch together a beautiful character which is nothing short of amazing. The main character is quirky and fun and I just love him.
then there are other characters who do not have the best attitude towards him and he puts up with it because, in my opinion, what else can he do? They're the only people he knows. However, if you don't like them just keep trudging on, he's interaction with them gets better and he meets new people.
for style, I say it's amazing switching between fun and serious quite appropriately.
grammar is top notch. Definitely up there with the best of RR
Story remains beautiful and I hope it will never disappoint.
if this had a price tag, I'd pay.
PreCursive (J.D. Campbell)Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The Promise of Runes strikes me as a pretty promising new LitRPG. If you're looking for another to add to your follow list, you should try this one out!
Style: This story has an interesting style, to my eyes. It really does feel unique to the author. In a good way, I'd say. The story flows well enough, with some flavorful grammar to light the way. The author has an interesting take on his System, as well. It looks to be one of the kinds that meticulously provides all kinds of details. I know that type has it's fans, and I doubt they'll be disappointed here.
Story: Our hero wakes up naked, alone and amnesiac, in the middle of magic forest with mutated monsters trying to kill him. A pretty classic intro for the fantasy and LitRPG genre, I'd say. There are hints of an intriguing story here, though. One of the most compelling parts of any amnesiac hero is the search for who they are, and I don't think this one will disappoint. Just from an event in this story, I can tell that there are some odd thing going on with Zed. Very promising, I'd say.
Grammar: Some odd word choice here, I have to say. Nothing bad, and nothing that makes me want to drop the story, but it did stand out to me. That could just be part of the specific writing style this author is going for though, like I said earlier. Otherwise, I'd say that the grammar in this story is fine.
Character: This story features an amnesiac main character, but that doesn't mean he doesn't have any character. I actually like that, because it seems like the type of amnesia he has didn't completely wipe away everything about him. Our hero still has a distinct personality, and that comes through clear in the writing. No issues with the characterization here.
Overall, I'd say that this one is worth a shot. If you're looking for a LitRPG with a classic case of amnesiac protagonist, look no further. This one has what you're looking for.
KelseaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I really like the story and the character of Zed is very interesting - it would be great to read more and learn more about him. MC seems jovial and happy-go-lucky kind of guy but there is much more to him that any1 can guess and the author for sure didn't finish all the character building and the surprises - that's the feeling I have got so far from reading the story.
Hope we will someday seenit finished and be satisfied a d happy with it and the journey it brought us for;)
It's still not finished and maybe not finished ever (personal reasons of the author) but it's worthy read and I sisncerelly reccomend it;)
CurlyGreekRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
So, it`s like this:
Grammar: Mostly alright, nothing burns the eye or throws of the pace, although some late chapters need editing. More than passable overall and doesn`t impede the reading nor does it drag down the experience.
Style: Not sure. I`m under the impression that the author is unsure as well. Nothing bad yet, maybe a bit bland, although the dialogue is snappy... if a bit too familiar. Maybe the author should work on his own voice more, or maybe it`s just an Australian thing. But there is one bad habit already shines through - most characters sound like one another. It`s not enough saying they from different places - they probably should have their own accents and, especially if English is the second language to them, the sentence structure will reflect it. Not that reading isn`t enjoyable so far, but those things can sneak up on ya.
Character: We`ll see. Not far enough in the story to say either way but nothing bad jumped out yet. Hopefully author will avoid the usual mistakes and troupes. If MC is a fighting man in a cruel, dangerous world - he should probably have clear picture of what`s his motivations in life that make him actively seek danger and that probably what should dictate his development. It would be especially tricky with whole multiple people`s memories thing. It will be interesting to see what will become of Zed with his Frankenstein`s mind.
Story: world setup is interesting enough. It`s nice to see author avoid whole "snap-and-apocalypse". I like realism of it coming in stages over a long time with people adopting and using it like people would. Not as...childish as most apocalypses stories. I hope there will not be any world saving and hero porn. That`s just for lazy writers who can`t write proper character arcs. Nothing kills the story faster for me than when MC is "chosen" to save the world and that`s why his nerd self can slaughter mountains of living beings and not be considered a maniac or at least bloodthirsty warmonger. It`s never
SteveabaileyRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The story is interesting. I read it in two sittings until I reached chap 41. I was about to give up on reading anymore because the MC dialog is so annoying and rambling. However, I might be able to keep reading since I won't be reading one chapter right after the other of the annoying dialog (the story is interesting... constant rambling dialog, not so much).
hg2bRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The overall story and the world it's taking place in are fairly unique and interesting.
While the main character is too shrouded in uncertainty to be judged, the majority of the side characters are either (willfully ignorant) horrible people or shrewd schemers, if not both.
The overall style seems alright, although it seemingly unnecessarily indulges in the more tortureous aspects of the plot.
Overall, it's a quite captivating work, though in good part due to morbid curiosity about how the wreck that is the main character's situation is going to shape/pile up in the future.
NycterelisRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I'll start by saying the author isn't a bad writer. In fact, a good portion of the prose is pretty good, especially when compared to its peers. However that's about all that's good. The rest falls into a "needs work" category.
The elephant in the room here is the characters and their interactions with each other. I get it's a grim dark story, but this isn't that. Someone like Chris would not be on Jason's team, or even in the village, *precisely because* it's a grim dark story. You cannot be that mean, cruel, and generally disruptive to the extreme detriment of the group in a grim dark setting. Someone would knife you in an alley.
Further, zed's willingness to just put up with the chronic abuse is beyond moronic. I get he needs answers, but by chapter 30ish, he has enough of them for him to be able to strike out on his own and more or less risk it. Maybe he'll die. It's grim dark after all. But someone with his past lives, such as they are presented, wouldn't just stomach the abuse.
The next major issue is the extreme lack of exposition. 30 chapters is a long time for the world at large, the village more immediately, and zed's system interface to all *still* be a mystery.
For my part, I've marked this as "read later" because there are good ideas here. The runes versus spellforms is quite fascinating. The ranks/levels are a breath of fresh air for a pretty stagnant genre. The author has good ideas, and despite my grievances with the characters *they are all unique*, which again for the genre is impressive in its own right. Each character, hated as they are, feel very individual rather than just a mouth piece for plot. I think the author has their work cut out for them, and i look forward to checking back in a few months.
CrowTalksRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The plot itself isn't bad, and the characters, when taken out of the dynamics of interacting with others, don't seem to be a problem either. The worldbuilding leaves a lot to be desired, but at the same time the author relies on our knowledge of the modern world to fill in the holes, so it's a typical post-apocalypse. The magic and its mechanics are very simple, logical, understandable, and will seem even more typical than the setting if you've read a lot of Asian novels.
A system whose nature remains a mystery to both the protagonist and the reader can be frustrating because only the protagonist has access to it, making it function more as a plot tool than a mechanic that the reader will be interested in studiyng. The author should remove the "LitRPG" tag, because the story is centered around something that has nothing to do with the protagonist's system.
The real problem, and the main reason I stopped reading, is the pointless dialogue and chapters that has nothind to do with moving the plot forward or developing the characters. They're essentially two sides of the same coin - the story just wastes my time with text that doesn't make sense.
Another reason is the author's obsessive desire to make all the characters directly or indirectly express admiration for the mystery of the protagonist or his inexplicable strength. The reader should enjoy it by putting themselves in the shoes of the protagonist or sympathizing with him.
But the protagonist is an idiot, a clown and just a collection of memories and traits; he represents neither an avatar for the reader nor a full-fledged personality. He does not develop, does not change, does not face psychological crises worthy of mention. Amnesia, then memory recovery and then "Oh, so that's what happened, okay".
In addition, the basis of the protagonist's personality is passive aggression. The author throws the MC into a situations where other characters treat him horribly, whether for good reason or not, and the protagonis
EthanRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
Overall this story starts out great zed is fun and intriguing the problems start when he joins the group and sticks with them. their first interaction is one where zed defeats a powerful beast and they decide to not steal the core from him because he is powerful enough to defeat it this implies that zed is a somewhat powerful character. But instead of staking it out alone until he finds a town or village he allows himself to be taken advantage of time after time. This means that it is really inconsistent zed is powerful one moment then taken advantage of in the next moment, this inconsistency continues making zed feel like a a weak willed loser with great power this makes for a main character that is really unlikeable.
other than the main character being so unlikeable the story is very well written.
Reading_FranklyRoyal Road
★ 0.5
Okay so, all things considered this wouldn't be a bad story barring one fatal flaw for me. I liked most of the story and even found the MC interesting. The world was set up interestingly and I had a decent amount of curiosity built up for the story. The issue came up with the interactions of characters. The abuse and reaction to are what killed it for me.
Please don't misunderstand, I have read and liked many stories that have had abuse as a part of them. I'm never a fan of that particularly but it is typically handled well. I feel that this story almost tried to normalize the abuse, which is why I can't read anymore. It is one thing to give up in bad situations, it happens. It's also one thing to let abuse happen when you are powerless. I feel that it is just accepted and the norm for the story. Calling a clear abuse of power "training" and most just shrugging it off?
Hopefully, our MC will eventually get out of the situation however up to this point I don't think that will happen. if you have issues with abuse or abusive relationships you should go in knowing that these are part of the story.