The Pride Of A Talentless Nobody

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Description

Set in afantasyworld with magic elements, a suddenstormcaught our main protagonist.

Succumbing to the storm he falls into atrance. He laterawakenswithno name,no home, andno memories of who he once was...

After spending some time wondering who he is something disturbing happens that changes his life...

Our protagonist is faced with a great task finding who he is and find his past, overcoming obstacles along his journey.

This is my attempt at making a full-dive fantasy. I'm trying to incorporate Social class diversity, Kingdoms, different races, Magic, personal abilities, combat, 7 sins, and 7 virtues, etc.

What I'm envisioning is dark yet it has some happy moments.

I gained alot of inspiration from the light novel "Ri:Zero kara Hajimeru Isekai Seikatsu"

Flummen Valle Arc:

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Flummen ValleSPOILERS duh

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I am an almighty being trapped in a weak individual's body that contains a lot of potential, after a bit of infighting to test his abilities we set our way to a village to get food, to my surprise there were a couple of tough PIG'S threatening my new student John. After a bit of struggling, I came out and overrid him and took control of his body after I took care of them and laid back to think of the next move I tried to make John take control again but that did not seem to work...

There seem to be people trying to abduct me in particular...

I have to keep John and myself safe...

NO

I WILL MASSACRE EVERYONE!

AHAHAHAHHA!

Feedback is always welcomed!

Thanks -IV

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021
Author
IV629

Tags

FANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADSUPERNATURALPSYCHOLOGICALMALE LEADMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSREADER INTERACTIVEKINGDOM BUILDINGMYSTERYHIGH FANTASYPROGRESSION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
1
Views
1,476

Chapters(8 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • CommonerPlusRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Style:
    The style of this story/author is unique. Every sentence is spaced out making it either easier to read, or harder depending on the person. For me it was unique enough and made it more simple to read so its (well I only read a couple of atories in royal road so far) 3.5 stars
    Story:
    This is a tale of a boy who lost everything and has trauma by recieving lost memories making him emotionally break down in chapter 1 and 2.
    This boy makes a error and releases a sadistic (I'm gessing villain) onto the world, but they share bodies making a king hearted boy get olaced with a sadistic man.
    There is hints of supernatural, action, phychological, comedy, and a whole bunh of other categories in this that would make a reader that reads for fun enjoy. 4 stars
    Grammar:
    The grammar is above decent, sure there are some grammatical errors here and there but everyone starts some where right? 3 stars
    Characters:
    John is a broken guy that lost everything and is trying his best to find out who he once was, by doing countless things in Chapter 1 example beign shouting his lungs off yelling out " who am I" into the forest to try and remmember his past.
    He is a kind hearted innocent character who knows nothing if the world other than countless objects
    He has good dexerity shown in chapter 2 and is pretty darn strong!
    Turpis is a sadistic egotistical haracter that wants to prove he is number 1 (shown at the end of chapter one and alot of parts in chapter 2) he is called "The king of Hexes and Counters" and is overpowered (shown in chapter 2) 3.5 stars
    Overall:
    This story has alot of potential and I'm looking forward to see more of this in the future! 4 stars