The Power to Destroy
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Humans have always believed that Gods have created their world.In the beginning, there were four gods. One was the Great Creator, the one who created the universe. Next was the Grand Healer, who was worshipped by all of the Great Creator's creations. After that was the God of Balance. With his great abilities, he maintained the balance in the world. Finally, there was the God of Destruction, the most powerful of all the gods. He was feared and revered by the other gods as well as the new beings known as humans. Soon, the gods began to multiply and there were enough of them to fill the universe. But one day, the God of Destruction fell into a spatial portal and was reborn in the world below as the son of a commoner. With all his powers intact, what will he do in this new world?Combination of Chinese wuxia along with magical fantasy. Both are my favorite genres so I decided to give this new idea of mine a try. I'm not very good at writing so please criticize.I apologize in advance for any of the slow updates. Chapters will be shorter than most novels for the most efficient story telling :P. Once again, criticism is welcome and if you spot a mistake, please say so. I'll attempt to watch out for it in the future. Hope you enjoy this attempt of combination between two genres. Thanks for reading in advance.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Penguinswagger
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 41
- Views
- 10,265
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- AkemuaRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Hah, seriously i almost never say anything bad about the writers, but this is just pathetic. Elementary students write longer paragraphs for school, in all honesty it just feels like your half assing this. Which is disappointing, so far it feels like it has a lot of potential, but at this rate, it’ll just be tedious and annoying to read. Shorter chapters = faster releases? BS, it’s just an excuse, you have your own life, and i respect that, but if you have any respect for novels, and other writers, please don’t continue with this charade. I would rather have a normal chapter release, once every few days, than this pathetic amount. The information we get is almost nill, and characters have almost no depth, it’s sad..
Sorry I’m being such a jerk, i usually don’t act like this, I’m getting so annoyed, because to me this story has potential, may not be the best, but just based off entertainment value alone, this should be amazing. Please don’t destroy this story, just because of this easily fixed problem.
Other than the paltry amount of words we receive, it’s got a very fun concept behind this, the grammar is also good. Really it’s only 6 chapters in, but because of the puny chapter size, i can’t say anything bad about it, other than the chapter size. Honestly i love the direction this is going, OP MC, conquering the world? What’s not to love, please don’t destroy this novel because of such an easy fix. 3.5 stars because this has a lot of potential, and it’s only the beginning, stories usually good better as they go along, you’re novel shouldn’t be an exception. Hopefully in the future, this can be changed into a much higher rating.