The Power of Formations

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Description

Emmet Laghaz loved puzzles.

All day, all night, puzzles. Ever since he was a child, Emmet could turn anything into a puzzle.

[participant in the NaNoWriMo Royal Road challenge]

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: em_rez

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Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 2,844
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Community Reviews(10)

stetysonRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
One of the best well written stories on rr. Such a great enthralling read on what is basically magic math.
LonelyYetiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Awesome caught up till the end and cant wait for more
Silent RainRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
One of the hands down best Rags to riches book I've read. This is an absolute binge worthy title and it's not even complete! The novel is easy to read and has strong visuals that draw from both modern and fantasy concepts.
one could argue that material description can be lagging behind at times, but you can generally get the idea by reading the paragraph and understanding the subtext.
according to the author themselves releases are at his discretion which is lamentable, is completely justified by the effort they put into their writing.
For any who have considered this novel, please pick it up and rate them just as honestly as the rest of us. Because this work earns those 5 stars.
War_X_LordRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A beautiful story that you can't get enough of, from the very start it provides an enjoyable story that progresses and grow beautifully with how the protagonist learn, struggle and break through his limitations, it keeps you eager to know what is coming next.
ArietateRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I thoroughly enjoyed reading all 34 chapters currently released. Very well written, with fun characters and an interesting story, set in a well-built world. This is one of the stories I really don't want the author to drop!
EnterUsernameHereRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Excellent magic system, ok story and characters and almost no grammar mistakes.
FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS GOOD AND HOLY FINISH THIS FICTION.
I recommend it.
PS: Get a better synopsis more reflective of your story's interesting magic system.
FrostmanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
really, i mean, it's good, yeah
SudraRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
An entertaining fast read, as long as the author doesn't make the rest of the story boring.
Style(4.5/5) - There are no problems here, although it doesn't stand out either. But even if the style didn't stand out, it would be a 5 if it were perfect. The only problem in the style lies in the authors repeated usage of terms we don't know, to the point where it clutters up the text.
The excerpt under the following spoiler tag doesn't actually spoil anything. That's how incomprehensible it is.
Spoiler: Spoiler
"There were two complexity classes commonly used to broadly classify every formational microcircuit algorithm: Atistonal, the set of what can be solved in efficient polynomial time, and Bakastarian, the set of whose solution can be verified in polynomial time, but not necessarily solved. Anything in the Atistonal set was also in the Bakastarian set, but only a few problems in the Bakastarian set were in the Atistonal set. Although it was unknown whether the Kamaran multi-directional mana separation problem was contained within the Atistonal set, and was able to be solved, it was definitely contained in the Bakastarian set, famously proven by a personage named Beromi over two hundred years ago.
If Kamaran multi-directional mana separation could really be solved, then that meant it in the Atistonal set as well. The important point was, if a different problem that was also in the Bakastarian set could be reduced to Kamaran multi-directional mana separation, then that meant it could also be placed within the Atistonal set, indicating that it could also be solved! The shocking thing was, this Bakastarian set was full of hundreds of unsolved problems, some more important and famous than even Kamaran multi-directional mana separation. So if these important unsolved problems could be reduced to Kamaran multi-directional mana separation, then that meant they also had solutions!"(Chapter 25)
That entire section above is pointless text. It's not worldbuilding and doesn't add
emma olaRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Good books are so hard to find but when found their chapters are so few. I mean really, really hard to find, I wish the chapters at least had 300 but who knows if the even pace is the reason why the novels are good. [no hypocrisy, no pride, no timidity, no delusion, no stupidity, no over blown exaggeration, no dramatic sentimentalism, no ego addict completely blind idiot, fresh air...]
I FEEL GOOD.
COMMENTS...
@DJERUKNIPIS - There is an excessive amount that can be known intuitively and also done intuitively. You should know about simply machines right?, nobody needs a ridiculous amount of knowledge to build simple machines nor does it stop them from working. Second the reason it is called talent or rare or unsual is that it occurs at a low frequency, otherwise humanity would not have "stone age" or have the word "invention". Third, so called food shortage is simplistic thinking, could it be you imagine that all technology that is useful immedately gets spread or even accepted for that matter, what do you think businesses exist for?. Seriously, did you go to school or is your scientific and historic background simply lacking?.
@DEIMOS - Another person with poor historic background. Without hidden or double identities, how do you think spies manage to stay alive or ensure the safety of their families. Without pretense or false idiocy, how many emperors and heirs inheriting from the parents or previous systems would end up dying, I can tell you more than we know in history or in present time.
@700118 - I can only say "seriously", then shake my head and say you read too little, your experiences in life are too narrow or that you simply read terrible books.
@SHANEL2018 - I don't agree that conflict is required, if it comes, it comes, if it doesn't, it doesn't, same with life, do you believe that conflict is a neccessary part of life? [that is like saying it is neccessary for all people to "suffer".]
@REIL-RHIIL - Seriously, would you cause trouble in the name of making
ShaneL2018Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This story is well written and a very solid "feel good" read - I would have given it 5 stars except for the fact it needs some basic conflict....something to drive the plot other than a narrative of Emmett's amazing progress. well done and I look forward to seeing how things develop.