The Pink Dungeon

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Description

Joseph Collins was your average private in the army. But that all changed with his death. As a perk of serving in the army any fatalities in the field have their consciousness uploaded to a massive array of servers where they may choose to become a manbot, a human conscious inside a robot, or be uploaded to one of the various virtual realities that offer a second chance at life.

Joseph has a problem though. When his consciousness was being uploaded the computer, was overloaded with high doses of radiation. Contamination to his upload has resulted in him being reborn as a dungeon. Can he survive in this adventurer filled world? Will he have to find out if he’s lucky enough to come back to life a second time?

Reborn as the pink dungeon will he make a name for himself or just be the biggest joke of all? Follow the adventures of a very odd dungeon, a captain of the guard, a very mischievous little girl, and Richard a traveler looking to find something more in what he thought was just a game.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: PCarrson77

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 286
Views: 52,006

Chapters(13 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

The_BakerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
good job on not making the dungeon OP its nice to see a dungeon with problems
JaudijaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
So far it is a briliant storie, but you my friend are steping in dangerous teritorry, Gods can be excelent tool but are dificoult to do properly. Best to not bring them to act in a mortal plane
SoufdeboefRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The story so far has been pretty nice for me and i enjoyed reading it a lot.
Dungeon stories are always a fun read on this site because everyone manages to put their own unique spin on them. Dungeon stories are kinda like dungeons in a way.
The Pink Dungeon is defenitly one of the better thought out stories on this site. The upgrade system is easy to understand and i always feel satisfied whenever an upgrade happens in the dungeon. The story and setting also make a lot of sense even though they are a bit cliché. The uploads have been regular so far wich is also a good point.
The only real problem i have with this story so far is the writing style.
The most enjoyable thing in a dungeon story for me is visitors interacting with the dungeon and its items, residents and effects. This can be gawking at the bueatiful sights within the dungeon, feeling terror before a strong boss or being excited when the loot sparks into existence.
Evertime someone enters the dungeon you can display emotions, describe the surroundings and develop your characters.
PCarsson77 almost skips over this part completely and only tells us the end result of everything.
An example.
I got pretty excited when i heard that it was possible for dungeons to make contact with each other, it is a really cool idea wich i didn't ecpect to read about. And when i heard the Pink Dungeon made contact with a dungeon that was "female like" i tought it may be the beginning of a cool alliance or maybe even some romance. What i got though was the end result of negotiantions.
What i wanted to see was the two dungeons to interacting with each other, this could have been through akward conversation, hard negotiations etc.etc.etc. What i got was two lines saying that there was a trade. Even if you would have just described how the negotiations went, or in what form they where held i would have been satisfied. But what you have done is like giving me a pie without taste.
There are many more istances like this i could poi